Question

I just wrote this song and it just flew through me and I don't know what it's really about yet but I should let yo guys be the judges on that. I’m Wild :

Put my hair up
And wear a tie
Fake it with the makeup
It’s teenage prime
Make it through the day
What time is night?
Aren’t you sick of it
Cause I am and yeah I’m fine


Just keep rollin (rollin)
Take it off and you’re just fine
Why do you worry (worry)
Takes too much time
While look at me and I say
“I’m wild”

See the beautiful girl with the guy,
Too much makeup and it’s not very light,
Look at the guy wearing the crown but don’t you see it’s hers not his,
The fight and crying of the trying girl,
Don’t you see her?
Ha she dressed nice

Just keep rollin (rollin)
Take it off and you’ll be just fine
Why do you worry (worry)
Takes too much time
While look at me and I say
“I’m wild”

You see that spirit (spirit) that is getting torn down
Come on she’s tired lets hear it (hear it) just one more time

Just keep rollin (rollin)
Take it off and you’re just fine
Why do you worry (worry)
Takes too much time
While look at me and I say
“I’m wild”

Answer 1

i think your lyrics are very lovely and nice for it to be something that just flew through your mind its amazing

Answer 2

I luv it 😩🖤

Answer 3

That's really good! You should record yourself on here singing it and post it.

Answer 4

Maybe but that probably going to be a for later. Thanks though for the compliment and recommendation.

Answer 5

Cool it should be about like a girl who wants someone perfect for her

Answer 6

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Answer 7

nice song

Answer 8

that song bussin bussin :))

Answer 9

this song is really good <3 no critique at all and this is outstanding for just going through your mind

Answer 10

this song epic swag

Answer 11

Thanks guys

Answer 12

@memphislee

Answer 13

Yea i think i can do a few things with this are you fine with maybe 2 or 3 days ?

Answer 14

I think im going to make part of this a melod verse

Answer 15

melody*