Question

I wrote another song I just had to get out so here it is, Shouting from the rooftops:

Feeling used
Feeling like I wanna cry
Then we could just pretend
When I say I’m fine
Maybe I don’t mean it
Sometimes it’s a lie

Feeling used feelin smashed
Like a vase that fell on the ground
I’m gonna cry I’m not okay
And you ask me are you okay, I don’t think so
Cause I’m still trying and trying
And I’m shouting from the rooftops

Come on now I’m not okay but that doesn’t mean I’m the only one
I feel like crying and getting it out
They still ask and ask “are you okay” say “yes I’m fine”
But seriously? Are you really?
Think and think about what has been done spin in circles and back in square one
Why do they care I’m of no use I’m useless why do they care?

Feeling used feelin smashed
Like a vase that hit the ground
I’m gonna cry I’m not okay
And you ask me are you okay, I don’t think so
Cause I’m still trying and trying
And shouting from the rooftops

Run and cry (cry)
It’s always solved my problems (problems)
But it doesn’t work all the time
You think and you say
You spin in circles
Isn’t it delightful? Just say I’m fine

Feeling used feelin smashed
Like a vase that hit the ground
I’m gonna cry I’m not okay
And you ask me are you okay, I don’t think so
Cause I’m still trying and trying
And shouting from the rooftops

Answer 1

it's great

Answer 2

i used to write books but siblings right "(

Answer 3

This is really good! Keep it up :)

Answer 4

thanks katrin and cheesestick

Answer 5

mhm

Answer 6

thats good

Answer 7

its fine ok job

Answer 8

I like it dude! Nice job!

Answer 9

it is amazing great job!

Answer 10

omg that is so good i love it!!

Answer 11

Thanks you guys

Answer 12

Really good!

Answer 13

Wow!! That's really good! Great job. You did so good, I have no complaints.

Answer 14

wow thats really good love it.... keep it up and have a great day

Answer 15

you too and thanks one more you guys

Answer 16

wow, that is mind blowing!!

Answer 17

@memphislee