I wrote a poem. Can u guys tell me if it's good?

jus ready to say bye forever
cant wait to die forever
wanna stay alive never
no1 can make me change ma mind
every1 thinks im jus fine
im jus a waste of time

Question

I wrote a poem. Can u guys tell me if it's good?

jus ready to say bye forever
cant wait to die forever
wanna stay alive never
no1 can make me change ma mind
every1 thinks im jus fine
im jus a waste of time

kward64 · Answer

thats dark

kward64 · Answer

but good

MusicGeek · Answer

ok. thanks. and i know it's dark. that's the whole point.

kward64 · Answer

@musicgeek wrote:

ok. thanks. and i know it's dark. that's the whole point.

ok

spiderkid1234 · Answer

@kward64 wrote:

thats dark

yea and is good

kward64 · Answer

@spiderkid1234 wrote:

@kward64 wrote:

thats dark

yea and is good

i said that

kward64 · Answer

@kward64 wrote:

thats dark

@kward64 wrote:

but good

see

spiderkid1234 · Answer

sorry

kward64 · Answer

@spiderkid1234 wrote:

sorry

ur fine