Question

This is um a lil sum i wrote while i was in my feels tonight ig lemme know what yall think about it and what i should name it or whatever ):


Been 5 months wid out him and yes I still cry,
But when I'm in public I make sure they dry,
Keep it a secret so it doesn't show,
Keep hiding my feelings so nobody know

The feelings got deeper the more that we talked ,
The thought of him leaving still feels like my fault,
I wish him the best if he ever moves on,
I hope that he knows that this is his song

The feelings were mutual at least for awhile,
He was the reason that I showed my smile,
He made me the person that I wished to be,
I swore to love him and he swore to love me,

Things didn't work out so their goes are bond,
I miss him so much and i miss that hes gone. . .

Answer 1

sad

Answer 2

Ouch..... This is true tho

But hey, there are others, but you gotta remember the ones you started with and understand what happened with them to know how to keep the ones that are coming ☺

Answer 3

i love it.. i really do

Answer 4

That's really good, I'm sorry for who you lost. ;((

Answer 5

Really sad but I like it, like josh said there are others just make sure you keep them close.

Answer 6

thats good also sorry for your lost ;(

Answer 7

It's sad, but you did a great job. I'm sorry for your loss.

Answer 8

Sad