Question

I wrote another song just now and finished it hope you like it =) The Perfect World:

What's a world
With one place
Havin fun?
Give some space
Wanna go?
This is not a race

This is an exciting whole new wo-orld
Make some friends have some fun
We’re goin all night
A party that lasts our whole life
It’s a perfect world

Screaming loud?
In your face
Have a cup?
Why not a gallon?
Having fun?
This is the place
Hey hey yeah

This is an exciting whole new wo-orld
Make some friends have some fun
We’re goin all night
A party that lasts our whole life
It’s a perfect world

All teenagers are called out
To this event
Oh so fun
Wish it lasted all night
To a world
It’s a perfect place

This is an exciting whole new wo-orld
Make some friends have some fun
We’re goin all night
A party that lasts our whole life
It’s a perfect world

(Screamin loud?)
(Have a cup?)
(Having fun?)

Answer 1

ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuu nicee

Answer 2

nice 🤸🏼🕳️

Answer 3

if you had a voice recorder an sang/rapped this song id love to hear it

Answer 4

also with a beat ofc

Answer 5

its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

Answer 6

I think it's a little short and I could add a little more words but thanks

Answer 7

npp

Answer 8

Sickkk dawg kep going

Answer 9

That's great! Keep up the good work!

Answer 10

Itotally wanna hear u sing it tho

I remember ur voice 😩 so beautiful

Answer 11

Amazing!!!!! I love it ❣️♥️💕