A White snowy owl was heard by a human being. The human name was Joey. Joey went upstairs to the attic and grabbed a flashlight and looked around in the creaky old attic and found an owl standing in the window and said “ holy bucks how the owl gets in here”. Joey has to solve the mystery to see if where it came in through. So joey called animal control and said “I have an owl in my attic is there a way I can get out of my attic” animal control officer ask “is there a window in your attic?” and joey goes “ yes but it closed” so the animal control officer goes like “ alrighty I will be there in 5 mins and send your address through my number so I can get there in time.” joey said “Ok I will” so joey texted the officer he said “ here’s my address is 530 Packers Ave, Fargo, MN 57689” joey sent that to the officer. Joey waited for the officer to show up and the officer showed up and KNock knock from the door so joey opened the door, the officer goes Hey joey show where the owl pls and joey goes sure to follow me and he lets the guy in and he closes the door and open the attic door open up and walk up and bring a flashlight and he flashes it to owl and joey said “There it is” and the officer goes “ ok let me handle so he handles it and walking downstairs and walked out and he said “im doing it for free’ and joey goes thank you for your help and have a nice night” and joey closed the door and locked it. Joey went upstairs and saw a window open so he closed the open window and walk back downstairs and locked the attic door. Joey sighs and goes to bed. So joey wakes up the next morning and hears a knock on the door so he gets up and walk to the front door and opens it and joey said “Hey who are you” so the unknown person said “ hey my name is john your landlord for your house and he said he gonna ask him to leave to go to the motel downtown and joey said “ ok I will tonight?”
John goes “ yes you to go tonight so we can replace all of your windows with better ones and joey said “ Ok do I need to pay for it?” and John said “ no we gonna do it for free and joey said “ Thank you I have been having nightmares when the owl was here in the attic so I will pack clothes and leave tonight so you guys and fixe things you guys have to do.” and the landlord said, “ Alrighty we will start at 5:00 pm tonight so we can see what’s going on and we will have a carpet cleaner and wood floor workers replace the floors and make sure they are not creaky so yeah i have to go bye and nice.

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A White snowy owl was heard by a human being. The human name was Joey. Joey went upstairs to the attic and grabbed a flashlight and looked around in the creaky old attic and found an owl standing in the window and said “ holy bucks how the owl gets in here”. Joey has to solve the mystery to see if where it came in through. So joey called animal control and said “I have an owl in my attic is there a way I can get out of my attic” animal control officer ask “is there a window in your attic?” and joey goes “ yes but it closed” so the animal control officer goes like “ alrighty I will be there in 5 mins and send your address through my number so I can get there in time.” joey said “Ok I will” so joey texted the officer he said “ here’s my address is 530 Packers Ave, Fargo, MN 57689” joey sent that to the officer. Joey waited for the officer to show up and the officer showed up and KNock knock from the door so joey opened the door, the officer goes Hey joey show where the owl pls and joey goes sure to follow me and he lets the guy in and he closes the door and open the attic door open up and walk up and bring a flashlight and he flashes it to owl and joey said “There it is” and the officer goes “ ok let me handle so he handles it and walking downstairs and walked out and he said “im doing it for free’ and joey goes thank you for your help and have a nice night” and joey closed the door and locked it. Joey went upstairs and saw a window open so he closed the open window and walk back downstairs and locked the attic door. Joey sighs and goes to bed. So joey wakes up the next morning and hears a knock on the door so he gets up and walk to the front door and opens it and joey said “Hey who are you” so the unknown person said “ hey my name is john your landlord for your house and he said he gonna ask him to leave to go to the motel downtown and joey said “ ok I will tonight?” 
John goes “ yes you to go tonight so we can replace all of your windows with better ones and joey said “ Ok do I need to pay for it?” and John said “ no we gonna do it for free and joey said “ Thank you I have been having nightmares when the owl was here in the attic so I will pack clothes and leave tonight so you guys and fixe things you guys have to do.” and the landlord said, “ Alrighty we will start at 5:00 pm tonight so we can see what’s going on and we will have a carpet cleaner and wood floor workers replace the floors and make sure they are not creaky so yeah i have to go bye and nice.

foolghost14 · Answer

its a story for my English grade and what do you guys think? if you let me know and comment down below

Itsuki · Answer

its a great story could use a little more work on it but overall its great

Astrid1 · Answer

👏👏Love it 🥰

XioGonz · Answer

@foolghost14 wrote:

its a story for my English grade and what do you guys think? if you let me know and comment down below

It's amazing. I love it so much! Make a part twooo 😯😯😯♥️

UhhhKhakis · Answer

Awesome ghost, keep up the amazing work!

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Astro · Answer

Great job 10/10

TETSXPREME · Answer

i like it, very good