Heres part 2 for the spook story for english

to meet you joey and see ya tonight.” joey sigh and turn around walk back in the house turned again closed the front door and locked it and heard an owl again and jumped and he ran up stairs and grabbed a flashlight and shined to owl and an electric owl that makes it sound so he grabbed it turns the thing off and throw it in the garbage and he sighs and turns off the light and walks down stairs and locks the door and packs his luggage and leaves the house and lock the front door and he called the landlord and the landlord answer and says” Hey joey whats up?” and joey says “ you guys can start the job thing”
And the landlord says “Ok leave the key under the rug by the front door” and joey says “ Ok I will I got to go see ya later” and the landlord says “Ok see ya next later” and they both hang up and joey hopes in car and drive to downtown. When joey got to downtown and pulled in the motel parking lot and want inside and he asked the person at the front desk for a room and the person at the front desk said “yes here’s your card and have a nice night” and joey said “ thank you and you have a nice night too” so joey walks to his motel room and grabs the card out of his pocket and swipes in the door lock and walk in and close the door behind him and put his suitcase on the bed and called the landlord and the landlord answers and joey said “how’s the house going so far” and the landlord says “we gotten the windows fixed and we are working the floors now and i will call you back later when the house is finished.” and joey said “Ok thank you for the update” and hangs up the phone and He packs his bags and goes to the front desk and tells them im out and heres the card and he hands them the card and he said “ have a great week” and he walks out and hopes in his car and starts aheading home and he arrived home and landlord calls him and joey picks up the phone and said “ Hey john whats up?” and john said “ house is fixed” and joey said “ alright yim almost there see ya soon” and landlord hangs up. Joey pulls in the his drive away and gets out and walks in house and sees the a note from his landlord and his key to the house.

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Heres part 2 for the spook story for english

to meet you joey and see ya tonight.” joey sigh and turn around walk back in the house turned again closed the front door and locked it and heard an owl again and jumped and he ran up stairs and grabbed a flashlight and shined to owl and an electric owl that makes it sound so he grabbed it turns the thing off and throw it in the garbage and he sighs and turns off the light and walks down stairs and locks the door and packs his luggage and leaves the house and lock the front door and he called the landlord and the landlord answer and says” Hey joey whats up?” and joey says “ you guys can start the job thing” 
And the landlord says “Ok leave the key under the rug by the front door” and joey says “ Ok I will I got to go see ya later” and the landlord says “Ok see ya next later” and they both hang up and joey hopes in car and drive to downtown. When joey got to downtown and pulled in the motel parking lot and want inside and he asked the person at the front desk for a room and the person at the front desk said “yes here’s your card and have a nice night” and joey said “ thank you and you have a nice night too” so joey walks to his motel room and grabs the card out of his pocket and swipes in the door lock and walk in and close the door behind him and put his suitcase on the bed and called the landlord and the landlord answers and joey said “how’s the house going so far” and the landlord says “we gotten the windows fixed and we are working the floors now and i will call you back later when the house is finished.” and joey said “Ok thank you for the update” and hangs up the phone and He packs his bags and goes to the front desk and tells them im out and heres the card and he hands them the card and he said “ have a great week” and he walks out and hopes in his car and starts aheading home and he arrived home and landlord calls him and joey picks up the phone and said “ Hey john whats up?” and john said “ house is fixed” and joey said “ alright yim almost there see ya soon” and landlord hangs up. Joey pulls in the his drive away and gets out and walks in house and sees the a note from his landlord and his key to the house.

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Astro · Answer

Good job, only one thing though...make sure to use correct punctuation and check spelling

foolghost14 · Answer

@astro wrote:

Good job, only one thing though...make sure to use correct punctuation and check spelling

Thank you astro

Astro · Answer

@foolghost14 wrote:

@astro wrote:

Good job, only one thing though...make sure to use correct punctuation and check spelling

Thank you astro

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