Question

Tell me what you think about my story so far!
~if you are gonna say something negative about it, please say it nicely.

file:///home/chronos/u-31ab75a0f556cedbe19d1d6ea4701e6e1316f6ab/MyFiles/Downloads/My%20Crush%20-%20Google%20Docs.pdf

Answer 1

you have to copy the link and paste it in your browser.

Answer 2

I'm not able to access it. Are you able to copy the image and paste it here?

Answer 3

i really like it sprinkles

Answer 4

file:///home/chronos/u-31ab75a0f556cedbe19d1d6ea4701e6e1316f6ab/MyFiles/Downloads/My%20Crush%20-%20Google%20Docs.pdf

Answer 5

copy that go to your browser and search it

Answer 6

dont work

Answer 7

^

Answer 8

Maybe send a Screenshot?

Answer 9

try this:

Answer 10

Clear some space

Answer 11

does the pdf work

Answer 12

OI love it. I'm into the first page and I'm addicted.

Answer 13

You have a really good hook, I like your writing style. I'll be waiting for chapter 2 c:

Answer 14

Its really good cant wait for chapter 2!!

Answer 15

Omg, so gooddd. If someone disagrees u all betta run XD

Answer 16

Just some punctuation errors, but overall pretty good.

Answer 17

it reaally good i love it

Answer 18

i love it so far, how is mine?
https://flvsstudent-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/asiagil_learn_flvs_net/EZhlX9Na7c9PhTqIioTJIksBzQwj9hM175B4w9uOahlmSA?e=jV36eg

Answer 19

this is really good

Answer 20

coolio!

Answer 21

Im reading it right now

Answer 22

I like it!!

Answer 23

when are you going to write chapter 2?

Answer 24

Thank you all! Im working on chapter 2!! COMING SOON!!

Answer 25

And thank you for the medals!

Answer 26

I couldn't see your story, but I am sure you are doing great!