Question

Hows this one I just wrote? Disappear:

What are you doing
Hello I’m right here
I see you but you don’t see me
Am I not there
Am I alive
You hear me speaking please just tell me why

I am feeling ignored
Maybe it’s ignorance but please just tell me
It’s just a secret just tell me now
All I feel is empty
I’m here waiting and here about to Disappear

Come on now I know you’re looking for me
You’re still home come see me
I’m feeling alone come help me
Am I nothing to you?
What am I thinking?

I’m feeling ignored
Maybe it’s ignorance but please just tell me
It’s a secret just tell me now
All I feel is empty
I’m here waiting and here about to disappear

Look at me just once
Are you even listening
I’ve always been here for you
So why aren’t you here for me
I need you now so why aren’t you here

I’m feeling ignored
Maybe it’s ignorance but please just tell me
It’s a secret just tell me now
All I feel is empty
I’m waiting here about to disappear

Answer 1

Oooo gurl I love it <3 <3

U better keep going.

I relate like flames on fire.

Answer 2

thanks astrid

Answer 3

That's really good. Nice job, you did good as always.

Answer 4

I LOVE ITTTTTTT

Answer 5

its amazing

Answer 6

it looks good

Answer 7

is bootiful best fwen <33

Answer 8

kinda like a Thanos snap

Answer 9

That is awesome I love the deep meaning of that and I can relate like 100%
Also, you can make that into song lyrics if you really wanted to? Not saying you have to though!!

Answer 10

its good keep it up

Answer 11

love it

Answer 12

Awesome job!

Answer 13

Good job

Answer 14

and thanks to the rest of you guys