Question

I still write verses, sooooooo.. I'm not sure what else I would do with these, but I'll share them

This is not the average love song
It's feeling out what should be said
When you're around, I just feel solved
I'm a puzzle, you could fix my head
When we’re together,
I’m all better
You give me hope when I wish I was dead
It's in what I've said, it's all what I said
I know you got feelings
And I've got them too
But what I feel
Is only felt for you

How would I handle
This dream-come-true?
If that could happen,
It could in nightmares, too
And I don't wanna imagine magic
In the vision of my love leaving you
But what could I do?

Answer 1

Ooooooo so goood. Keep writingg

Answer 2

That's really good, please continue the song. It looks solid so far.

Answer 3

That's really good. Keep it up.

Answer 4

Really nice!!

Answer 5

Really good )`:

Answer 6

don't tell me that's-

Answer 7

Like it