Question

how is this??

Love



I fall in love just to realize that everything was a lie. You told me ‘’i love you’’ and ‘’I will be here always’’ but when things got hard you left. You were weak. You said forever and always.

Its every time I fall in love, I get heart broken. You were weak so now I'm going to be. You where the one thing that made me feel safe and loved and yet you lied to me. Why? What was so wrong with me that you decided to leave?

Every day I would fall more and more In love with you, but you fell out. You left me broken, helpless, confused, scared. I was in pain and you just added another 100-ton boulder on the other millions that I have. Why?

When I tried to talk to you ignored me. You made up these excuses not to talk to me and yet when I told you about it you made me the bad guy. Why?

You made me weak. I can't handle this everlasting pain. You where my life and now you left.

I'm in pain and can no longer stand it. I'm sorry but the more I stay in this world the more heartbreak I will experience. I don’t want to die but I want to kill this pain. I'm gonna finish what you started. Goodbye

Answer 1

Everything looks pretty good. Just some spelling errors as far as I can see.

Answer 2

Man, it's nice but sad.

Lol, don't fall in love. Waste of time.

Overall, love it tho <3

Answer 3

this is great

Answer 4

Nice job! Maybe check the grammar tho?

Answer 5

I like it. I do have a question however, whats with everyone posting poems lately?

Answer 6

its the best

Answer 7

It's awesome dude