Rate some of My Poems

Christmas what a wonderful holiday,
a holiday where Santa
rides in galore, and the spirit of Jesus circles around
and where gifts of love are given to the poor
and children watching the tree waiting for old Santie Claus,
and where eggnog is drunk and fruitcake gets eaten, and love of the
warmth is covered in bows
_______________________________________________
She left because of love
love left because there wasn’t enough
I had enough of betrayal
betrayal is what lead me to hell
hell is where my love went to die
every night I sit here and cry
for the one I once loved
knowing she left because there wasn’t enough

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Rate some of My Poems

Christmas what a wonderful holiday,
a holiday where Santa
rides in galore, and the spirit of Jesus circles around
and where gifts of love are given to the poor
and children watching the tree waiting for old Santie Claus,
and where eggnog is drunk and fruitcake gets eaten, and love of the
warmth is covered in bows
_______________________________________________
She left because of love
love left because there wasn’t enough
I had enough of betrayal
betrayal is what lead me to hell
hell is where my love went to die
every night I sit here and cry
for the one I once loved
knowing she left because there wasn’t enough

axie · Answer

CRISTMAASSS

axie · Answer

1.000.000.000.000.000.000.000.000.000/10 amazing

Bozark · Answer

@axie wrote:

1.000.000.000.000.000.000.000.000.000/10 amazing

thank you

Sock · Answer

i love the Christmas one,its my favorite holiday

Sock · Answer

10/10

Bozark · Answer

@sock wrote:

10/10

thank you

Vengeance · Answer

I killed Santa. He's not coming this year :p

Sock · Answer

@vengeance wrote:

I killed Santa. He's not coming this year :p

what'd u do with the body

Vengeance · Answer

@sock wrote:

@vengeance wrote:

I killed Santa. He's not coming this year :p

what'd u do with the body

Burnt it to a kwispee cookie

Sock · Answer

@vengeance wrote:

@sock wrote:

@vengeance wrote:

I killed Santa. He's not coming this year :p

what'd u do with the body

Burnt it to a kwispee cookie

I would've ate him, see if he tastes like milk n' cookies

Vengeance · Answer

xD

TannerCroft · Answer

both of them are awsome

TaitlynCroft · Answer

These are amazing. The first on gives a feel of joy and carefree the second one is more in a demise and the tone of dread *chef kiss*. Amazing job!

HeatherByrd · Answer

100000000000000000000/10