Question

Here are my new rap lyrics. How you like it:

A Las Vegas State of Mind (The Flamingo Hip Hop)
By Hailey Hoyt
A Las Vegas State of Mind (The Flamingo Hip Hop)
Yeah, yeah
Ayo, friends, it's time.
It's time, friends (aight, friends, begin).
Straight out the full dungeons of rap.

The son drops deep as does my pineapple.
I never laugh, 'cause to laugh is the father of rappel.
Beyond the walls of monkeys, life is defined.
I think of Love when I'm in a Las Vegas state of mind.

Hope the grapple got some dapple.
My Snapple doesn't like no dirty chapel.
Run up to the rappel and get the apple.

In a Las Vegas state of mind.
What more could you ask for? The pointy son?
You complain about hatred.
I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the gun.

I'm rappin' to the flamingo,
And I'm gonna move your bingo.

Crazy, bright, strong, like a heart
Boy, I tell you, I thought you were a start.

I can't take the hatred, can't take the unicorn.
I woulda tried to kiss I guess I got no scorn.

I'm rappin' to the bingo,
And I'm gonna move your flamingo.

Yea, Yaz, in a Las Vegas state of mind.

When I was young my father had fun.
I was kicked out without a run.
I never thought I'd see that gun.
Ain't a soul alive that could take my father's one.

An entertaining fairy is quite arbitrary.

Thinking of Love. Yaz, thinking of Love (Love).

Answer 1

very good choice of words! *thumbs up*

Answer 2

But what I don't know is the toon of it so I really don't know what its like

Answer 3

@hailey1 I got him to read them and he said not bad

Answer 4

am pineapple hehehe. but you didn't mean me tho

Answer 5

So how does the beat go?

Answer 6

Nice!

Answer 7

It's nice!!

Answer 8

its awsome!!!!!

Answer 9

Thnx