I need a bit of help writing a full story. What I have in mind is childish and pretty bad sounding and I don't know how to make a full story without it sounding bad or copied from someone else.

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NeverAlone · Answer

OH MY GOSH
Fam I gotchu. 
what's the genere of the story?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

OH MY GOSH Fam I gotchu. what's the genere of the story?

Fantasy?? The plot revolves around demons (cause I'm unoriginal) So

NeverAlone · Answer

You can always make demons originial if you have the right plot. What're you going for? Sad story? Horror story?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

You can always make demons originial if you have the right plot. What're you going for? Sad story? Horror story?

I can't exactly describe the tone. It's gonna have scary monsters n stuff but I know it's not horror..

afflatedAnimism · Answer

It might be adventure or something I'm not quite sure

NeverAlone · Answer

What's the main character's goal? If I can understand what that is, I can help you construct a good story

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

What's the main character's goal? If I can understand what that is, I can help you construct a good story

It's a real work in progress but right now the main character's goal is to not die and to go back to heaven. Or something like that, I'll try to make it sound more original

afflatedAnimism · Answer

It's either that or he's recruiting other demons to go back to Earth to unleash evil onto the mortal plane. I think I like this one better

NeverAlone · Answer

So the character's been to heaven before? Maybe you should involve conflict with the gods?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

So the character's been to heaven before? Maybe you should involve conflict with the gods?

Basically. I'll try to include the gods' conflict

NeverAlone · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

It's either that or he's recruiting other demons to go back to Earth to unleash evil onto the mortal plane. I think I like this one better

That's interesting. Elaborate on this. Does the character have a good reason?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

It's either that or he's recruiting other demons to go back to Earth to unleash evil onto the mortal plane. I think I like this one better

That's interesting. Elaborate on this. Does the character have a good reason?

The reason is to get more people to come to hell cause God is dissatisfied with man's actions

NeverAlone · Answer

So he's serving the God himself? Interesting. What about the antagonist? Who's gonna try and stop him?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

So he's serving the God himself? Interesting. What about the antagonist? Who's gonna try and stop him?

Other demons who aren't working with him and other minor gods

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@neveralone wrote:

So he's serving the God himself? Interesting. What about the antagonist? Who's gonna try and stop him?

Other demons who aren't working with him and other minor gods

There's no one antagonist, it's a lot

NeverAlone · Answer

So there's just a protagonist? There has to be some sort of conflict between him and someone else.

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

So there's just a protagonist? There has to be some sort of conflict between him and someone else.

Him and other demons and gods have problems

afflatedAnimism · Answer

I think he may have major conflict with one entity in heaven and one in hell

NeverAlone · Answer

two antagonists eh? Bold choice. If you pull that off correctly, it'll be perfect.

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

two antagonists eh? Bold choice. If you pull that off correctly, it'll be perfect.

I should that the antagonists have conflict with each other

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@neveralone wrote:

two antagonists eh? Bold choice. If you pull that off correctly, it'll be perfect.

I should that the antagonists have conflict with each other

*Should mention that

NeverAlone · Answer

Everyone's mad at eachother

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

Everyone's mad at eachother

So so. It is hell so almost everyone has beef in some way

NeverAlone · Answer

Is this anything related to the plot of The Good Place?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

Is this anything related to the plot of The Good Place?

No. I've never even heard of that until you brought it up

afflatedAnimism · Answer

I looked it up and no, it's not related to that show at all. What I think the purpose of my series may be is: nobody is really a good person. Humanity is flawed and nobody can escape their sins

NeverAlone · Answer

I see. Okay then, tell me about the plot you're planning to induce

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

I see. Okay then, tell me about the plot you're planning to induce

I'm thinking of having the main character be cast to hell by God because God is getting tired of humans being awful. He goes to hell and has to go through trials to recruit other demons. Him and the demons (after they're all found) have to go through other trials to go back to Earth. Once on Earth they have to ruin the planet to get rid of most of the people.

NeverAlone · Answer

So like a judgment day kind of thing?

BankRobber17 · Answer

i could help i write a bunch of stories with my publishers

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

So like a judgment day kind of thing?

Sort of

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@bankrobber17 wrote:

i could help i write a bunch of stories with my publishers

Alright!! Scroll up a bit to see some stuff I was talking about

BankRobber17 · Answer

yes that could proably be like sort of a problem if someone juges inside of a story

BankRobber17 · Answer

do you have a plot question

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@bankrobber17 wrote:

do you have a plot question

No, I don't think I do. Is there anything you would recommend?

BankRobber17 · Answer

yes

BankRobber17 · Answer

how did the author begin the story

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@bankrobber17 wrote:

how did the author begin the story

By having the main character be cast to hell

itzselena · Answer

mean comical

chloeandkailee4life · Answer

i can help im really good at making stories of my own and not copied from someone else

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@chloeandkailee4life wrote:

i can help im really good at making stories of my own and not copied from someone else

Okay!! If you scroll up you can see some of my plot

chloeandkailee4life · Answer

okey

JordynTheAlien · Answer

It depends- What do u like the most? When I need help writing a story, I usually think.. "Well, what makes me happy?" All u need is what makes u happy, and u need a genre u need a full-on story! Believe me, I am a writer I write every time I get a chance. Hope this helps fam! <3.

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@jordynthealien wrote:

It depends- What do u like the most? When I need help writing a story, I usually think.. "Well, what makes me happy?" All u need is what makes u happy, and u need a genre u need a full-on story! Believe me, I am a writer I write every time I get a chance. Hope this helps fam! <3.

Alright!! Thank you so much!

JordynTheAlien · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@jordynthealien wrote:

It depends- What do u like the most? When I need help writing a story, I usually think.. "Well, what makes me happy?" All u need is what makes u happy, and u need a genre u need a full-on story! Believe me, I am a writer I write every time I get a chance. Hope this helps fam! <3.

Alright!! Thank you so much!

Ofc! <3.

BrokenMoon · Answer

Have you started writing?

Firexmello2 · Answer

Just make one up

eternitybun · Answer

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

eternitybun · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

afflatedAnimism · Answer

That includes main character

eternitybun · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

eternitybun · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

dang ok >;^

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

dang ok >;^

You can get a whole long paragraph about them if you want idk

eternitybun · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

dang ok >;^

You can get a whole long paragraph about them if you want idk

wdym?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

dang ok >;^

You can get a whole long paragraph about them if you want idk

wdym?

I can tell you about the characters if you'd like

eternitybun · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

sure >:)

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@eternitybun wrote:

you should make it about them fell down to hell and find a way to get back to heavem >:) idk

Thats kind of the plot

how many characters will there be or lik the main?

6 or 7

hmmmm do you need hep making themm <.< im not good at plot tbh

I think I have them down. Thank you irl

dang ok >;^

You can get a whole long paragraph about them if you want idk

wdym?

I can tell you about the characters if you'd like

eternitybun · Answer

you can telll me during lunch if youd  like >:)

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@eternitybun wrote:

you can telll me during lunch if youd like >:)

Yayyy

GeekGold · Answer

Holy crap the reply lines

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@geekgold wrote:

Holy crap the reply lines

Yeah that's my Irl friend

GeekGold · Answer

Neato Mosquito