Question

I dont know why i just wrote the things that first came to mind so here is a sneak peak through my head hehe lol.
Damn (roll it back set it off)

I am sorry
I cant give you my word
I am sorry
I cant give you the world
This is not my life
I'm living a nightmare
I see you peering I am inside my head
I see you sneaking I cant give up no more
I see myself falling. Into a dark void
These drug are killing me
My parents just don't see the happiness
I am happy when I am high
I don't know why
I am sorry I am leaving now
You wanted to give me a life
I took your opportunity because I thought ​I would live

I messed

I fell down
no one can pick me up
I am doing all these drugs weed, coc, dmt
the lsd has got me swimming through these streets I'm floating now
come with me

I just wanted to see I'm am free
I am dead have a party
in honor of me

Answer 1

not bad...sounds kinda like a rap song

Answer 2

Its amazing! I love it. do you have the stuff to actually make it into a song? this would sound fire.

Answer 3

^

Answer 4

I produce music so i mean if you want i can change it up and make a rap song outta it

Answer 5

you do whatever you want I'm just saying it sounds good

Answer 6

Ah i make music, and i would be finishing off my first song but i got my studio stuff taken away.

Answer 7

oof my bsf just wrote a song not too long ago and posted it on sound cloud maybe u guys could collab lol

Answer 8

Just do what you want man! if you think it'll make you happy then make it!

Answer 9

I love it! Now produce it

Answer 10

Just go for it dude you already have the lyrics

Answer 11

so..case closed

Answer 12

OMG i need to stop saying that..its so addicting