how should i start off my paragraph i need some ideas but don't give answer. Its about vultures

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shelbybro2526 · Answer

my sis needs help

Astro · Answer

You usually start off with a thesis statement. What kind of writing are you doing?

shelbybro2526 · Answer

essay

Astro · Answer

@shelbybro2526 wrote:

essay

What kind of essay, that's what I am asking

shelbybro2526 · Answer

one about vultures

Astro · Answer

How do you think you should start it off?

shelbybro2526 · Answer

well i would start off with

The problem is the vultures(Birds) keep destroying cars, tearing up roofs and taking stuff from people's yards. And they tear up the trees from their weight(4lbs) and that can cause them to have to know where to land. Then the tree branches and the tree falls on their house. That is the problem.

shelbybro2526 · Answer

but my sister is not for sure

Astro · Answer

That does sound good. One thing. I think the first sentence should be "One main problem with vultures is that"....Then you state the reasons.

shelbybro2526 · Answer

ok thank you, you are the best

Astro · Answer

You're welcome, and I am happy to help! Let me know if you need any other help. :)

shelbybro2526 · Answer

ok

axie · Answer

If this question is already answered, please close it so that others can ask more!

shelbybro2526 · Answer

ok sorry

Astro · Answer

@shelbybro2526 wrote:

ok sorry

It's fine, no need to apologize

axie · Answer

Its fine! We close questions that way the ones that have been answered go to the closed section, that way we can always just find a question that hasn't been answered

shelbybro2526 · Answer

ok but all of you are the best

Astro · Answer

@shelbybro2526 wrote:

ok but all of you are the best

We are happy to help!