Question

What can I say about mixed emotions in an essay?

Answer 1

What is the essay about?

Answer 2

It's about a challenge that I overcame in my past.

Answer 3

Interesting sounds like it will be a good essay. What do you need help with exactly?

Answer 4

I'm stuck on what to put about my mixed emotions. I put:
My mixed emotions include sadness, depression, anger, rage, fear, disgust, and a lot more infections than most people can think of. I get mixed sentiments when I get bullied because I feel all these feelings simultaneously. I became more sensitive than I used to be.

Answer 5

Just a couple of things here...First, I do not think you need to put anything further about mixed emotions...just expand on the though. Second, I think you should take out the part when you say "and a lot more infections than most people can think of". It sounds like something that would be just rambling on and you could add something that flows better with that. Third I feel that you should say "I get mixed sentiments when I get bullied" then add a comma instead of saying because just so it flows better once again amazing job!!!

Answer 6

thnx

Answer 7

Always happy to help! Let me know if you need any more help, you are doing amazing so far! :)

Answer 8

Sounds good, but yea, go wit what astro says. In my opinion, i don't think infections should even go there.


A lot of emotions can lead to mental illnesses, maybe if any of ur emotions led to a mental illness, write abt that as well.

Answer 9

The girl should not sit near only a boy because a boy could just take a pic somewhere thats not supposed to be taken and then drama happens

Answer 10

thanks*