Question

The green eyes
Beautiful smile
Thats all they see
Where are her flaws
She got none
Perfect ari
Lil do they know
She has scars
She hides them
Like her pain
Cries herself to sleep at night
Strong, funny, amazing, perfect ari
Underneath it all she hates herself
Cant look in the mirror
Pushes down these thoughts
Yet they beg to come out
Jump off a cliff
Bleed and cuts her skin
Perfect ari might not be so perfect after all
Moms blood on her hands
Christophers death in her dreams
Fathers touch she fears
Tears fall down her face like fire
But perfect ari can do no wrong
Yet she fears the dark
She can scary you away
Angel to u devil to herself
The urge to end it begs to be let out
She dont know who she is but
Perfect ari is dead
Sweet ari is burried
So she askes herself one last time who am i
And her answer
Nun but 3 words is all
A broken girl

Answer 1

I really like it. Very creative, keep up the great work!

Answer 2

That's very nice

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

You're welcome!

Answer 5

Very sad, I'm sure some people can relate to this.

Answer 6

I can kinda relate to this... but I am not going to cause this is supposed to be just about you and your poem.

Answer 7

yeah ik its sad and damn im sry

Answer 8

thats good

Answer 9

ty

Answer 10

nice

Answer 11

Thank you for writing something so relatable.

Answer 12

SO GOOD!! I LOVE TO SEE THIS KINDA STUFF ON THIS SITE

Answer 13

you got some real talent girl, keep up the great work!

Answer 14

aww 🥺 it's beautiful and u did an awesome job hun🥺😘🥰💙✨

Answer 15

That is good!!

Answer 16

Wow! That is really amazing<3 You did an incredible job. I would suggest adding some grammar changes, but that's really it.

Answer 17

That was awesome i actuall rapped that with a beat lemme know flop or drop and i will post on youtube if it is a drop

Answer 18

Only with the owners permission though i dont wanna be copy writted

Answer 19

Its nice, good job!

Answer 20

ty sm yaĺl

Answer 21

awesome poem

Answer 22

ty

Answer 23

That was beautiful

Answer 24

Thats amazing

Answer 25

thannks

Answer 26

This is very beautiful, i love it, an you should keep up the good work i cant wait to see what else u write (:

Answer 27

thank u so much

Answer 28

i actully just made a new one

Answer 29

Thats sad