Question

Can someone rate my writing?
Wonderland, a story of dreams..
I’ve fallen in love with the idea of impossibilities. The fact that anything and everything can happen. The thought of being Alice and going through Wonderland sounds so fun. It sounds like an escape. So here I have created my Wonderland. The place where I am friends with the Cheshire Cat and the Mad Hatter. The Jabberwocky is nowhere to be found, Tea time is always, and the Queen of Hearts is dead. “Down with the bloody big head!” we will still yell out every now and then, just for fun. I run through fields with talking daisies and singing Roses. Hand in hand With Alice, we create our world, one that the pains of this one cannot penetrate, all that is left is to follow the white rabbit. This world is for everyone. Anyone who needs it, they may enter. For Wonderland is a safe place, away from hatred and Evil. Away from pain. Come with me now, To this magic place. Take my hand and we will fly. If we’re fast enough, we might even get a glimpse at NeverLand, but don't get too close. Captain Hook might catch us. Still, we fly over him and stick out our tongues, we dance among daydreams and sleep in the clouds. What a wonderful daydream we will have, Alice and I. And we will never wake up, not this time. The blue caterpillar always gives us nonsense advice. But it makes nonsense so that makes sense to us. Because this is wonderland. There is no pain here. If we fall down, the grass gets a little grumpy but some flowers will help us up and we will continue running through the world. Wonderland is my home. It can be yours too. Alice will be with the Mad Hatter arranging tea. We will save some seats. Happy Un-Birthday!! Let’s celebrate! We dance together, soaring through the air, laughing at the Mad Hatters' funny dances. As we spin, we never get too dizzy. Wonderland is amazing. We sip tea and sing. Wonderland…

Answer 1

i think this looks really good!

Answer 2

10/10 for effort 9.5/10 for a great writing

Answer 3

its good i really like it!!

Answer 4

Make sure to use correct grammar though.

Answer 5

yo bro keep up the good work

Answer 6

This writing is amazing, but maybe do a spoil alert for the people who haven't watched wonderland? i rate it a 9/10

Answer 7

Also Punctuation Is a key to writing

Answer 8

Make sure everything is spell right tho!

Answer 9

Yes, grammar is really important for a writing!

Answer 10

And spelling everything correctly is really important as well.

Answer 11

y'all are so nice QvQ

Answer 12

But other than that you Did A well done Job Gj for the effort

Answer 13

dame tu cosita

Answer 14

and maybe some context clues for big words some people might not know sometimes, if you can

Answer 15

\[\LARGE\frak that was epic \]

Answer 16

Lol This question Blew Up!!

Answer 17

ya i didn't even read the hole thing but i give you 26/10 bc i ran out of brain cells

Answer 18

that was very nice

Answer 19

thats a great movie(s) btw

Answer 20

Also As well As to Make sure you Indent!

Answer 21

i think its a good 11/10

Answer 22

Wonderland, a story of dreams..
I’ve fallen in love with the idea of impossibilities. The fact that anything and everything can happen. The thought of being Alice and going through Wonderland sounds so fun. It sounds like an escape, so here I have created my Wonderland. The place where I am friends with the Cheshire Cat and the Mad Hatter. The Jabberwocky is nowhere to be found. Tea time is always, and the Queen of Hearts is dead. “Down with the bloody big head!” we will still yell out every now and then, just for fun. I run through fields with talking daisies and singing roses. Hand in hand with Alice, we create our world, one that the pains of this one cannot penetrate. All that is left is to follow the white rabbit. This world is for everyone. Anyone who needs it, they may enter. For Wonderland is a safe place, away from hatred and evil, and pain. Come with me now, to this magic place. Take my hand and we will fly. If we’re fast enough, we might even get a glimpse at Neverland, but don't get too close. Captain Hook might catch us. Still, we fly over him and stick out our tongues, we dance among daydreams and sleep in the clouds. What a wonderful daydream we will have, Alice and I. And we will never wake up, not this time. The blue caterpillar always gives us nonsense advice. But it makes nonsense so that makes sense to us. Because this is Wonderland. There is no pain here. If we fall down, the grass gets a little grumpy but some flowers will help us up and we will continue running through the world. Wonderland is my home. It can be yours too. Alice will be with the Mad Hatter arranging tea. We will save some seats. Happy Un-Birthday! Let’s celebrate! We dance together, soaring through the air, laughing at the Mad Hatter's funny dances. As we spin, we never get too dizzy. Wonderland is amazing. We sip tea and sing. Wonderland..

Answer 23

I get so close to falling numb the pain with the money and im all in

Answer 24

That's really good grate job

Answer 25

gosh this is blowing up thank y'all!

Answer 26

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Answer 27

It looks really good just check for grammer and spelling

Answer 28

Mhm! If you ever need english help never be afraid to ping me

Answer 29

:DD okok imma clos this cus my thing is blowing up but thank you all sm!

Answer 30

And dm me if you need help with grammar, my mom used to ask me if i could grammar check her Facebook posts sometimes. LOL