Question

i have a story do yall want to read it?

Answer 1

sure

Answer 2

No

Answer 3

Yeah

Answer 4

Sure

Answer 5

THE PHOTO

A long time ago a boy named Dave lived in an old broken down house with boarded windows and a leaking roof that could fall anytime,the floors were covered with mold and the doors barely opened. The puke green walls had brown and yellow all over, this house really needed fixing and a lot of it, the plumbing was also bad. I’m Dave, this is my story of how I died. It all started with a photo I found in the attic, I came down from the attic to give it to my mom and dad to see if they knew the people in the photo, my mom “they’re probably the people that used to live here, there is nothing to worry about!”After my mom said there’s nothing to worry about, I just put the photo in the box and taped the box shut after I taped the box I heard a noise from the kitchen so I went to go check it out but as soon as i opened the kitchen door the noise stopped so I started walking to my room and as i approached my room I thought I seen a figure go across the hallway, so I quickly ran to my room and hid in the closet and I noticed i dropped my phone so I slowly open the closet door and I walked to the door, I opened it to see my phone was not in the hall, i grab my flashlight and i walked slowly through the hallway to notice that a shadow of a person slowly moving my direction, I slowly walked towards the shadow, before I knew it was gone, so I went back to my room got in my bed to see if i could go to sleep, surprisingly I fell fast asleep. The next day I got up to the smell of bacon cooking so I ran down stairs to see that my dad was cooking which surprised me because he never cooks, I sat down to eat, my mom comes in and kisses my forehead, then she kissed my dad’s cheek then she sat down next to me and said “did you sleep good?” “I guess” I said “ what’s wrong sweety?” she asked “nothing is wrong mom, I promise” I said, she smiled then said “ I love you” “ mom, i love you too” I said then smiled, I got up and put the dishes in the sink then I got my bag, got in the car, my mom drove me to school and I got out of the car, I went inside put my bag in my locker, then I went to my class room, sat down and looked at the teacher so I could see her teach. But after class everyone grabbed there things then went to the next class, throughout the class I either wrote down stuff or I colored things,all through I never learned anything, I just wanted to get out of there so I could go home and sleep, but school takes forever< as soon as school ends I’m going to go to bed and sleep till my mom wakes me up, so I could eat supper then I would go back to to bed and sleep till morning. After school I came home and layed down in my bed , I fell asleep reading a book about ghosts, a few minutes later my mom came into my room and told me “if you want to go eat, supper is ready?” “ I’m not hungry “ I said “all right, if you do get hungry, please eat” she said “I will” I said, I got up a few minutes later and ate something small so I wouldn’t be hungry anymore, after I got something to eat I went back bed and in the middle of the night someone came into the house ,I heard him open my door to see a six foot tall man looking down at me with a creepy smile, I started to reach for my lamp but the man moved closer to my bed, so I quit trying to reach for the light so he quit moving towards my bed. My mom opened my door and the guy stabbed my side and my heart then left out the window , my mom called the police station but the police didn’t get here on time, once they got here they checked my pulse, then the ambulance got here and they tried to revive me but nothing happened so they announced me dead at twelve forty six am, after the forensic investigator scene they put me in a black bag then they put me on a gurney... i'm not finished but here it is

Answer 6

It's something!!

Answer 7

They were not kidding about it being a story. But I like it!

Answer 8

yall like it?

Answer 9

Yes!

Answer 10

thank you i tryed my hardest on it

Answer 11

Good Job, i love it

Answer 12

I Love it!

Answer 13

thank you all

Answer 14

No problem.

Answer 15

it gets better though

Answer 16

love it

Answer 17

Keep it up!

Answer 18

Beautilful

Answer 19

U deserve dis

Answer 20

It is not a story, but rather a Short Story right now, how much are you meaning to put into this Story though?

Answer 21

a lot

Answer 22

I love this <3333

Answer 23

Loved how you described things<3

Answer 24

thank yall

Answer 25

its bootiful princess <33333333

Answer 26

That is such an amazing story <3