This ones actually for English class, it’s a poem, she said it had to be soulful?? What do you think?

Nobody noticed I was broken
Shattered-
Never spoken
A heart of pure gold
Maybe that is why
I’m sold
A mind
That’s greater than the ocean
Lost in every motion
A soul that’s lighter than most
Sometimes forget that I’m the host
Trying to keep it in control
But maybe
I should just let go

Question

This ones actually for English class, it’s a poem, she said it had to be soulful?? What do you think?

Nobody noticed I was broken
Shattered-
Never spoken
A heart of pure gold
Maybe that is why
I’m sold
A mind 
That’s greater than the ocean
Lost in every motion
A soul that’s lighter than most
Sometimes forget that I’m the host
Trying to keep it in control
But maybe
I should just let go

AvaMarquez · Answer

It's good

MidniteSunny · Answer

i rlly rlly like it, when preformed out loud it has a rlly nice heart-felt feel to it, ty for sharin ^^

axie · Answer

I like how open it is, its kinda refreshing

LostLegacy06 · Answer

Tyty hopefully my teacher like it lol 🤍🤍🖤

LostLegacy06 · Answer

likes*

Trinity2323 · Answer

This is amazing it really is a heart-to-heart feel.

LostLegacy06 · Answer

@trinity2323 wrote:

This is amazing it really is a heart-to-heart feel.

🤍