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SirBlackbeard:

I made a story about a innocent illusionist

TETSXPREME:

Where?

SirBlackbeard:

Jonsey wakes up early to practice his illusions.“Ahhh, a good day to win some money!” He says to himself. Little does he know that he will only win pain and torment. He washes and cleans himself like any other day, and he went on his way to practice. He did his slippery slope trick, but Jonsey can admit that he has not yet mastered his craft as much as he wants, because work and other stuff has to be primary. But today is a special day. He is off work for a week and luckily a talent show with a grand prize of ten thousand buckaroos is happening at the same time. But he forces himself to stop procrastinating, even though he has 5 hours before the show starts, he knows that time comes and goes very fast. He spends the rest of the time doing his other tricks, even though he knows he doesn’t have time to do all of them on the stage, he is just glad to be able to do his hobby and potentially get paid. He realizes that time has ran out for practice for now, and he must quickly go to the destination of the talent show. He walks onto the red carpet at the front door and greets everyone he sees with a friendly ”Good day!” or “Howdy matey!” He makes his way to the back and sees other contestants. He says ”HEHEHEHE I hope you guys put your best foot forward because I have been working for a opportunity like this for a long time, and there will be no mercy” The others started to question Jonesy with spite and then a strange looking man, almost seeming to come out of thin air, whose face had a green tint, with long green ears, dressed with a jet black trenchcoat and with a darkness about him asked, “What will you be performing today young contestant?” Jonesy proudly replied with “I’ll be doing illusions, but some call it magic, but I don’t like to call it that.” The dark man said with a sinister grin underneath the darkness, “Yes. A man of my trade, come with me over here.” As he said it, he slightly shoved him in the direction of where his decrepit, green, phalange pointed, and Jonsey obeyed the dark man. When he was far enough from the others that they couldn’t hear, he asked “What is your name, aspiring artist?” Jonesy replied “Jonesy, what is yours?”He then said, “My name is not important, just know that I am just a friendly, trustworthy green guy that likes onions.” He then continued to say “Are you willing to make a deal with me to guarantee win that money, because after all, that is why we are all here anyways, right?” Confused Jonesy replied, “It matters, what is the deal?” He started to chuckle and immediately he became serious and said ”Since you are a man of my trade, like I had previously said, I want to teach you the other side, the green side, the way of power and greatness!” Then Jonesy said “What do I have to do to get this so-called power?” As Jonesy said it, the people that hosted the talent show started calling people up to perform. The strange man then said “Don’t worry about it, it’ll be fast and painless, just a minor experiment.” When Jonesy heard that, he replied “I’m not a lab rat, I thought this was to get me the money.” The man of darkness then exploded with more laughter and said “It is too late, my fellow brogre, this is no longer a consensual takeover, because the green one always takes over.” He continued with his devilish laugh as Jonsey quickly walked away, but before he left his presence, he splashed some kind of white elixir, with the scent of onions, at frightful Jonesy, and he walked althemore quick, while he asked himself why would he even hold a conversation with such a green madman. As he walked away he felt weak and slow, and he saw everything turn green, and then black. When he woke up he immediately realized that he was already on stage, and he panicked, but he realized he couldn’t move his body. When he looked down, he saw that he was dark green and doing some kind of ritual dance, and someone repeatedly exclaimed “THE DEFAULT DANCE!” Then he realised that he saw this “dance” in a game, but he couldn’t remember the name of it. And as soon as his torment to watch and feel such a cursed movement was over, everything turned green, then black, like it did before. Then he woke up in his own bed, tightly tucked into his sheets, and realising, it was all over, and then he heard a voice from the window that exclaimed. “Indeed, it is all ogre, for now.” As he looked in the direction of the voice, he saw nothing, and in a sigh of relief and recovery, he rested his head on the pillow, thinking about if what happened was just a dream, or a cursed reality.

TETSXPREME:

Is it about the shrekonin?

SirBlackbeard:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
Where?
right there mate

SirBlackbeard:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
Is it about the shrekonin?
maybe, maybe not, but there is a greeen figure that likes onions

axie:

I love it.

SirBlackbeard:

@axie wrote:
I love it.
thank you, it took a lot of time :)

Vasellasar26:

Nice i love it

SirBlackbeard:

@vasellasar26 wrote:
Nice i love it
thank u thank u

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