Question

I wrote a story acting like I am a real person, how is it? Posting in comments!

Answer 1

Dearest, Anne
U are prob wondering why I have not written back to u in such a long time, I have been very busy. It has been so hard to focus now since what happened. I am SO excited to come to Visit u. Are u? One thing I do not like is how odd it is in Germany. So many weird new rules there are, I have been thinking about how I should come to visit u more often. You are my best friend, so u mean a lot to me. My parents would be upset to know we are still friends, I try to hide the letters u wrote to me. But mama and papa found them, and I could not write back to u because of them. They are upset with me, I am sorry for everything Anne. But, I am SO excited to be visiting u, your parents are so chill with us being friends! How come, my parents hate u? You are my best friend, as long as my cousin. I just wish that Mama and Papa would not be mad at Aunt and Uncle, or at least to where they can not be mad at u, and just them!
Everything has been hard lately, with school everything! Life is SO hard here in Germany, everyone talks about trying to escape, while I am stuck here doing nothing, and just suffering in pain. I wish our parents would get along, it is so childish how they act so bad towards each other! Maybe someday they will learn how to act more maturely. We love each other, they just need to understand that. We are not like them, we do not fight, we get along. They need to know how painful it is to not see each other. Why can't they just understand!? Do u know what I mean? Parents are so hard to understand sometimes. If only, we could convince them to actually be ok with each other!At school, I have not made ANY new friends. Everyone thinks I am weird for just moving here in the middle of the school year. It drives me crazy, nobody likes me, they all treat me like a poor kid.

I told Mama and Papa about how hard it is to not be able to see u. They just told me, that u are not family anymore. I hate them! I need to think of a way to sneak to u ASAP. Your my best friend I need u, you are also my cousin. My ONLY cousin, why can't they just leave u alone!? I am failing my math exam, we just took it and I got an F. I am not passing any classes! NOT even the classes I am good in! Mama and Papa, are making me fail. I cannot see u, and u ace math as well, so I need u to tutor me someday AGAIN. Maybe I can send u my math questions for the NEXT exam Monday! I have exams every week, all of them are Math. Not one single English or Writing exam, just all math. The teachers know I am bad at math. They just send me a tutor who hates me! Her name Is Jen. She makes fun of me for my name, just like everyone else. I cannot stand her! I need to get friends, and people against everyone who calls me KITTY, fast! I hate my name, I wish I had your name. Anne is such a cool name, KITTY is just the worst name ever! I do not get much time left, but just know I am here for u, whether Mama and Papa accept it or not. I love u more than the world, they are going to take away everything so I cannot write to u anymore. Goodbye for a while, I love u.
Yours Truly, Kitty.

Answer 2

Oooo i rlly like dis one ! Ze name kitty alluding to wut Anne Frank called her diary, right ? And I luv how Anne ish now Kitty's cousin, like dis ish sum alternate reality where Kitty's alive, related to Anne, and either more current language ish used bacc den or wut happened den didnt happen until modern times

Answer 3

commend chu for ur gr8 work, keep it up ! ^^

Answer 4

Long

Answer 5

xD

Answer 6

That's what she said- I mean-

Answer 7

Thanks!

Answer 8

its good

Answer 9

It's long but well thought out overall rating 9/10

Answer 10

I think it's super good! I love the storyline, if you are meant to turn this into your teacher though I would suggest using correct grammar.