Question

read my essay https://flvsstudent-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/noahcam1349_flagler_flvs_net/EZjfFAKekZZFg5BgMkRvP08BTPR7ONaDa6A53I4ZUqz8Mw?e=iDZfSs

Answer 1

This is good.. But- How come u have the same pfp as someone else Ik? But I like your story!

Answer 2

So, do you need a proofread? If so I'm not very useful, here. xD

Answer 3

cuase i am truck 101

Answer 4

i forgot my passowrd

Answer 5

Imma head, byeeeeee

Answer 6

But good story!

Answer 7

thx

Answer 8

I mean its good but kinda inappropriate

Answer 9

how

Answer 10

see for urself

Answer 11

outta my opinion i think its good keep up the good work (:

Answer 12

ok thx

Answer 13

i got a 97 on it

Answer 14

It's decent, but it's lacking a lot.
There was no explanation as to why Megamind wanted to do that.
No detail which airport, or how they ended up where they were.
Also, it lacks proper punctuation. It also makes it seem like it's all continued in one breath with the amounts of "ands".

Answer 15

thx?

Answer 16

lol

Answer 17

honestly i love it (:

Answer 18

itz great i love it

Answer 19

nice nice matey

Answer 20

I love it

Answer 21

this is good

Answer 22

you need to copy and paste this essay on grammarly because you have some mispellings