Question

Here is another song-lyrics I just wrote. I am going to make this into a song but here is the uncut version.

I call this song "We are strong"

Have you ever felt like you can't see no more
have you ever felt like can't hear no more
Have you ever
have you ever
have you ever felt like you don't belong
well this song is for you
(you're the future)

We hide our feelings
we don't let others in
let me tell you that wrong
you are wrong not right but false
oh let people come inside
I was dying but now I'm free
my parent are happy they see me for me
You don't have to close up
You don't to shut people out
Just because that one person hurt you
they dont know how we feel

Yea We are strong we will survive
(Yea We are strong we will survive)
there is nothing more alive
We are strong we are alive we will find more peace in these fights
We are strong
We will grow up finding to next path

One foot after another
that what dad told utt it more like hopscotch
jump jump jump twist twist twist
turn turn turn
oh i am your angel
take my word and feel them take my word hear them
you will be amazing like no one else
no can see your beauty your fire burn bright
oh I see
everyone one of us arn't weak

Yea We are strong we will survive
(Yea We are strong we will survive)
there is nothing more alive
We are strong we are alive we will find more peace in these fights
We are strong
We will grow up pushing

You are
you are
you are
you are amazing
you are

Answer 1

I really like the creativity and passion. Amazing job!

Answer 2

u did an really good job on it! i love it!

Answer 3

Ya this is amazing at least you're brave enough to share your music

Answer 4

Add some instruments and a beat, and your set. I really like it.

Answer 5

Good job its really good (: keep it up

Answer 6

Keep up the great work I love it

Answer 7

Nice work! :)

Answer 8

Wow! That's really nice. Good job! I'd love to see more lyrics from you.

Answer 9

this reallly good <3

Answer 10

Nice.