Eternal, by Jeffery WK:

One day you broke my heart,
But my soul still lives Eternal.
I thought you were the one,
When really, you were not.
You hurt me bad and I survived,
because my soul is Eternal.
I thought I loved you till the end,
but after I saw who you really were,
That was no more my friend.
My soul lives Eternal.

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Eternal, by Jeffery WK:

One day you broke my heart,
But my soul still lives Eternal.
I thought you were the one,
When really, you were not.
You hurt me bad and I survived,
because my soul is Eternal.
I thought I loved you till the end,
but after I saw who you really were,
That was no more my friend.
My soul lives Eternal.

Astrid1 · Answer

Nice.

Although about a broken heart that makes a soul live eternal ? I'm guessing you think your soul is gonna continue to reincarnate.

Sailor · Answer

Nice poem but [insert the question that Astrid asked here]

Spectrum · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

Nice. Although about a broken heart that makes a soul live eternal ? I'm guessing you think your soul is gonna continue to reincarnate.

No, it means that even though I had been broken. I still remain whole. Basically the heartbreak didn't affect me, I stay strong.

Astrid1 · Answer

But heartbreaks should affect you, or else you never had something special w that person. Therefore, your heart never was broken in the first place.

TETSXPREME · Answer

Idk your soul doesn't lives eternal unless u do the rightful thing and i will not say what it is because your supposed to figure it out but its okay
"i thought i loved you til the end" kinda dont makes sense to me tbh doesn't seem like proper grammar

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

Its really good i like it :)

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

Ah, I don't quite understand the meaning of this poem, but it's good nonetheless. I suggest taking some critique from the others that spoke.

Spectrum · Answer

I'm editing it lol.