Question

read this and tell me if it is good

Answer 1

Kylie Vanwinkle
260 M-65, Whittemore, MI 48770
Whittemore Prescott Jr/Sr High School
6001 Mills Rd, Whittemore, MI 48770
My Michigan Hero Essay
Lots of people have problems, but they also have people to help them through it. Take my friend Xavier Anderson For example, he helped me a lot throughout the pandemic. The pandemic is one of the many things that he helped me with though. One thing helped me though is the struggles and the loneliness, The loneliness was not as bad as the struggles. Another thing he helped me though was sadness. When I was sad Xavier was the only one who could make me feel better when I'm with him. It felt as if everything was going to be ok. Every time I could see or talk to Xavier it felt like the ole in my heart was held. I also tried being there for him if I could but it was hard to use because I don't have a phone so it was hard to communicate at home with him.

I love to communicate with people. It's one of the best things in life for me, a couple reasons why communicating is good is because you learn from people and how we make mistakes because not always is that person gonna help you do something good. Another reason is because you need friends to help you through life and if you don't communicate then you will start to lose them. Xavier taught me that in life it's good to make friends, be successful and to try to move on ,this is why I picked Xavier Anderson for my Michigan hero.
During the pandemic I had lots of problems. Another one of them was not being there for Xavier as much as he was there for me, Xavier Anderson didnt care he just wanted to be there for me and he understood why I could not be there for him. In the summer we could not talk to each other or see each other so that was a big problem for me. But when we got back this year it was not that easy. We fell apart a lot this year but we kept coming back to each other. The pandemic hurt a lot of people , even if it was hurting them by bad grades or family, loneliness another big one is sickness. Almost everyone lost someone during the pandemic. But they got through it. Everyone has someone even if it is your dog , mom , dad, uncle, grandma, boyfriend you have someone, someone you look up to, someone you would give everything to. No one is perfect but everyone is beautiful.
Mother nature gave this planet to God and Jesus for a reason not for us to give up but to make mistakes and make them right. When something hurts you you don't have to give up but forgive , forgive the person that hit you in highschool , forgive the person that left you alone for a new friend , Because if you hold in all of that grief it will never heal your heart needs to heal and move on that's why I chose xavier Anderson, he reminded me that you can forgive , you can move on and be successful. Xavier taught me that in life it's good to make friends be successful and to try to move on ,this is why I pick Xavier Anderson for my michigan hero

Answer 2

i like it

Answer 3

same

Answer 4

but i want
to know what you guys think

Answer 5

thank you

Answer 6

did u write it?

Answer 7

yes i did

Answer 8

it's really nice

Answer 9

thank you whats your fav part

Answer 10

Xavier's lucky to have u as a friend

Answer 11

thank you

Answer 12

I liked the part where u said that even tho he was there 4 u, he understood why you couldn't be there 4 him as much

Answer 13

yeah that's one of my top three again thank you lol

Answer 14

no problem

Answer 15

is it for a class project?

Answer 16

yeah

Answer 17

Well I'm sure u'll get an A

Answer 18

thanks

Answer 19

ur welcome

Answer 20

You should probably run this through Grammarly to make sure it's correct. There are around 23 things that you could improve.

Answer 21

thanks

Answer 22

I use Grammarly too, It helps me when I write my stories.

Answer 23

this seems like a Grammarly ad

Answer 24

lol its not

Answer 25

Announcer's voice *Just visit www.Grammarly.com and start your writing journey.*

Answer 26

It is very long but i like it lol took a while to read

Answer 27

Great! but when the teacher or whoever you are writing this for is it a summary, or an essay because most times they do not want to hear your point of view they want to know if you learned! Other than that great work! :)

Answer 28

it is rlly good. and it is an amazing written peice

Answer 29

Great! but when the teacher or whoever you are writing this for is it a summary, or an essay because most times they do not w

Answer 30

Super good!!

Answer 31

It's more than good! I really love it, keep it up.

Answer 32

amazing. < 3

Answer 33

I suggest you remove the address on here since that does give out a little too much information. Other than that, God created nature and Jesus is just God in human form. Overall, the ideas are well thought-out so keep up the good work. A simple and free online site like Slick Write can help with your writing needs. Keep in mind formatting and always progress forward.

Answer 34

nice!