Question

broken from birth
unwanted and insecure
I grew into a version of her so full of hurt
my innocence was taken away ripped out of my soul
how to feels to be shattered broken and unwhole
an unabridged reality I was left alone to forlorn
running every time I heard you in the hall
Yet I would answer when you call
bequeathed tattered and battered on the floor
expected to clean my own blood off your door
I learned to fend for myself
A pastime you kept on a low shelf
It all ended tragically
I could feel my soul leaving me
He tried to defend me
Only to be taken away from me
You came to a sudden end
I believed that was the end
As I healed I knew not what to expect
Now, as if from hell you ascend
To bestow your last farewell
upon the child you left

Answer 1

Wow Floo... Thats really good. I like how you captured emotion, well done

Answer 2

THAT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING ON THIS PLANET *except my GF *

Answer 3

That's Amazing!

Answer 4

This is really good, you put a lot of emotion and descriptive language into this poem. Good job, I'd love to see more poems from you

Answer 5

it legit takes the world to make me cry but this almost did it, good job 🤍

Answer 6

🙏🏻

Answer 7

Nice job Floo!

Answer 8

Wow that is really good

Answer 9

It really has a lot of meaning in words i like it.

Answer 10

you did a really great job. This spoke to me a lot because of what I am going through thank you. You should sing it and post it :)

Answer 11

it is a really good poem. u captured a lot of emotion and pain.

Answer 12

sick!!