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YooGirlAriel14:

I hadda write a song for class tell me wut u think pls There are so many words bottled up inside They scream out to be released your’ve cast a spell over me Been blinded for long, but can now see You’re the only thing that matters in my life All that I’ve done is for you The biggest piece, the biggest part The one person who controls my heart If i could kiss away your pain i would If i could hold you every night, I would If I could erase every mistake, every other face I wouldnt change a thing Because all those things led me to this place And to you Because I…I could never break your heart I wouldnt know where to start All I know to be true is the only breaking will be done by you If I could make you smile all day, I would If I could be the person you want, I would If I could erase every mistake, every other face I wouldnt change a thing Because all those things led me to this place And to you Because I…I could never break your heart I wouldnt know where to start All i know to be true is the only breaking will be done by you

TETSXPREME:

I like it 9/10 :)

YooGirlAriel14:

thanks

TETSXPREME:

No Problemo

Alex1513:

Wow this is good I will had sum stuff but this is perfect

YooGirlAriel14:

lol thanks boo

Alex1513:

@yoogirlariel14 wrote:
lol thanks boo
np

Sakuru:

it's deep and It seems familiar but I give it a 9/10

Rylee88:

Nice. Very long lol

Beasty:

This is nice!!

afflatedAnimism:

It's super good

YooGirlAriel14:

thx

nate04:

looks good

itzselena:

juicyy i like it

Eveeeee2007:

100/10

YooGirlAriel14:

thanks

Eveeeee2007:

your welcome friend

YooGirlAriel14:

have a good rest of ur day boo

ILikeToEatChildren:

Is there any music that goes with this song that you have? I would enjoy a recording of it. I can really relate to your song. Great job.

YooGirlAriel14:

umm i havent made a beat yet sry and aww thnks

Sharkattack123:

8/10 nice

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