Question

I finally got a new songs since I have a lot of feelings for finals but I just had to get it out. What Do You Want?:
Chasing and chasing doing one thing and another
What is right and what is wrong
This is this and that is that
This is what I’m writing
It’s time to go
No you can’t have that

Going in circles
With the guess and the guess
Is that right no that's wrong
What is written looks right
Right looking is what's written
Bother, bother, bother, bother
What do you want?

Seeing this and saying I’m crazy
I say thank you I know and let's be honest
You’re the one that asked
You’re the one that said this
Take it as a compliment
Now I don’t know what to say
This is such a disgrace

Going in circles
With the guess and the guess
Is that right no that's wrong
What is written looks right
Right looking is what’s written
Bother, bother, bother, bother
What do you want?

I see you just give me a minute
I’m just being teared apart
From the to you and a me swinging back to the you and you see
That I need to have time
To appreciate that I
Need to be with just me

Going in circles
With the guess and the guess
Is that right no that's wrong
What is written looks right
Right looking is what's written
Bother, bother, bother, bother
From me to the you swinging back to the me and I ask
What do you want?

Answer 1

Sick bestie!

Answer 2

thanks

Answer 3

I like it.

Answer 4

thanks AsTrId

Answer 5

I like it!!

Answer 6

thank you!!!

Answer 7

:00000000 so bottiful<333333

Answer 8

thanks abbyyyy<3333

Answer 9

lmao cant spell

Answer 10

yw bestie<3333

Answer 11

noice, its like butter, bc butter is good

Answer 12

awww thanks

Answer 13

its pretty good, nice job

Answer 14

thanks

Answer 15

OMG!!!! This is amazing I know you will do amazing on finals .Just take some breaths .AND do your best!!!! You should consederd singing this and posting it on youtube.Or Becaome a poet or writter for people .this is tallent

Answer 16

thanks but, I don't nesesarly think I'm good enough @iamisis

Answer 17

It's pretty good!!