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"US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" Belongs to the nonfiction genre. The genre for “The Blackness” Belongs to the fiction category. "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" Is about aiding a foreign government's worldwide conservation programs and activities, such as migratory bird management, endangered species protection, wildlife habitat rehabilitation, and aquatic creature habitat rehabilitation. The topic of “The Blackness” is a story about an oil spill. The point of view we're reading is from the perspective of a bird who stated it couldn't see due to the oil spilled on it and could only hear, it said it hoped the humans would convert the darkness into light. "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" Relies on The U.S Fish and Wildlife Service for example, safeguarding and improving fish, wildlife, and plants, as well as their ecosystems, for the benefit of the American people. "The Blackness" relies on people to do something about the oil disaster, for example, the bird remarked, "I hope the humans will do something to bring light to all of the blackness.” "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" Does not explain on how they plan to conserve wildlife. "The Blackness" does not include a scene in which humans assist with the cleanup of the oil spill. The "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" has an instructive tone because it provides information about the subject of the post. "Reporting" and "data" are two terms that come up frequently. Because of the language in "The Blackness" "Her voice sounds worried" and "I hear her,", the second article is more intended to entertain than to inform. The purpose of "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" is to inform the public about wildlife endangerment, because It’s nonfiction and the main topic. The purpose of “The Blackness” is for entertainment purposes because it’s more of folktale and fiction. The message of "US Fish and Wildlife Service Announces Expanded Reporting for Birds Captured and Collected During Deepwater Horizon Response" is about informing the public on how oil spills can affect wildlife and cause endangerment. The message of "The Blackness" is to show how much oil spills affect sea life. You can tell from the bird's perspective that it is sad because it kept hoping that humans would do something about the oil spill. It talked about how if it could see, it would see its home, blackened with the oil of a mishandled well deep in the ocean, that it would see its friends, covered in slick crudeness, and how it would desperately observe the choking, billowing smoke, polluting the sky. Because it's from an animal's perspective, even if it's not real, I'm sure an animal would think like that. It kept thinking about how its home was polluted, how it wouldn't be able to eat its favorite type of fish, and how the oil would cover the sky and no longer allow its family to fly in, I believe "The Blackness" would best motivate readers to protect and preserve nature from human influence.
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