I need help with writing a introduction. Here is the information i already have about the introduction : "The beginning is where the characters are introduced, Mr.Jack And Kate".

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Sailor · Answer

Here's something to start off with:
"Kate and Mr. Jacks stand in the crowded city outside the airport, looking for some way out of the city"
If that's something your looking for ಥ‿ಥ

dukedadon · Answer

That may or not work considering the writing prompt.

dukedadon · Answer

That may or not work considering the writing prompt.

Sailor · Answer

Hmmm.... maybe edit the sentence I said to "Kate and Mr. Jacks stand in the crowded city outside the airport, looking for somewhere to hide."?

dukedadon · Answer

"Kate And Mr. Jacks stand in the crowded city outside the airport. Their mission as of right now is to look for somewhere to hide".

dukedadon · Answer

is this one good @sailor ?

Sailor · Answer

@dukedadon wrote:

is this one good @sailor ?

Yeah that's a great start

dukedadon · Answer

HAHA NOW WHAT DO I DO ?

dukedadon · Answer

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dukedadon · Answer

@sailor

Sailor · Answer

Maybe go into detail of the setting a bit more, or maybe have them go somewhere, do something, etc.

dukedadon · Answer

'Kate And Mr. Jacks stand in the crowded city outside the airport. Their mission as of right now is to look for somewhere to hide. After walking a few miles, they find shelter in the woods. They made a shelter out of sticks, mud and other resources they coud find."

dukedadon · Answer

@sailor , dudette, can i use this?

Sailor · Answer

@dukedadon wrote:

@sailor , dudette, can i use this?

That works. Just make sure the sentence makes sense.

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