When the road goes hollow
I dont know what way to follow
I'm too busy thinking about tomorrow
And this pain is causing me all this sorrow

I borrowed all your time
My life is on the line
I'm thinking ill be fine
Looking for the signs

I'm leaving it behind
And I read between the
Lines you promised youd
Be mine but now were
Running out of time

Im fighting all this pain
Everybody knows my name
There playing all those games
Now i'm dancing in the rain

I feel like I got hit by train
Got all this damage done
To my brain oh its such a
Shame

You loved playing with my heart
And it tore me all apart
Now I dont know where to
Start you stole my heart
Right from the start

Question

When the road goes hollow
I dont know what way  to follow
I'm too busy thinking about tomorrow 
And this pain is causing me all this sorrow

I borrowed all your time 
My life is on the line 
I'm thinking ill be fine
Looking for the signs

I'm leaving it behind
And I read between the 
Lines  you promised youd
Be mine but now were
Running out of time

Im fighting all this pain
Everybody knows my name
There playing all those games
Now i'm dancing in the rain

I feel like I got hit by train 
 Got all this damage done 
To my brain  oh its such a
Shame

You loved playing with my heart
And it tore me all apart
Now I dont know where to 
Start you stole my heart
Right from the start

axie · Answer

Nice! i like it, you need to switch up the flow a tiny bit tho, when you switch verses in a rap, the last line of the first verse should switch up the ryme for the next verse

bella2025 · Answer

@axie wrote:

Nice! i like it, you need to switch up the flow a tiny bit tho, when you switch verses in a rap, the last line of the first verse should switch up the ryme for the next verse

its not a rap though

axie · Answer

What style is it?

bella2025 · Answer

@axie wrote:

What style is it?

I dont know I just write it with my feelings so

axie · Answer

Nice, thats how i write too

bella2025 · Answer

@axie wrote:

Nice, thats how i write too

cool

Riah1 · Answer

This is really good. Keep it up!

bella2025 · Answer

@riah1 wrote:

This is really good. Keep it up!

thank you

YooGirlAriel14 · Answer

good song

bella2025 · Answer

@yoogirlariel14 wrote:

good song

thxs

kaleighh533 · Answer

its very good i love it

bella2025 · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

its very good i love it

thank you very much