new song called :On my own

What we had was more than
Enough and I know it got alittle
Tuff

I know sometimes we let
Go and other times we felt
Alone but now im blowin

up your phone I cant do this on
My own I wonder where did we
Go wrong do we have to let
It go I guess well never know

But I cant do this all alone and
Now im staring at the wall feel
Like im about to fall (fall In love)
Again I knew it wasnt the end

Still I cant do this on my own please
Dont take my calls cause now I can do
This on my own so dont let me fall (fall in love)
Again never thought this pain would end

We got aways to go we spent a long long
Time all alone but your heart is still the
Place I call home

Question

new song  called :On my own

What  we had was more than
Enough and I know it got alittle
Tuff

I know sometimes we let 
Go and other times we felt 
Alone but now im  blowin

up your phone I cant do this on
My own I wonder where did we
Go wrong  do we have to let
It go I guess well never know

But I cant do this  all alone  and
Now im staring at the wall feel 
Like im about to fall (fall In love)
Again I knew it wasnt the end

Still I cant do this on my own please
Dont take my calls cause now I can do 
This on my own  so dont let me fall (fall in love)
Again never thought this pain would end

We got aways to go  we spent a long long 
Time  all alone but your heart is still the 
Place I call home

sciencegirl · Answer

I like it

bella2025 · Answer

@sciencegirl wrote:

I like it

thank you I wrote it last night before I went to bed so I didnt know how good it would be

sciencegirl · Answer

@bella2025 wrote:

@sciencegirl wrote:

I like it

thank you I wrote it last night before I went to bed so I didnt know how good it would be Ok

nikenike · Answer

it good and cute

SaltTheLoser · Answer

Terrible

bella2025 · Answer

@nikenike wrote:

it good and cute

thanks

bella2025 · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

Terrible

hmm thanks ig

Eveeeeeeeee2007 · Answer

good 1000/10

bella2025 · Answer

@eveeeeeeeee2007 wrote:

good 1000/10

thxs

PrInCeSs111 · Answer

i like it

bella2025 · Answer

@princess111 wrote:

i like it

thanks

bella2025 · Answer

is there anything you guys think I need to work on

P1n3appl31 · Answer

I like it. it could be a little longer but it's still good

bella2025 · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

I like it. it could be a little longer but it's still good

thank you

summerbabyy1217 · Answer

its good i likeee

bella2025 · Answer

@summerbabyy1217 wrote:

its good i likeee

thank you

laylasnii13 · Answer

I like it but i think on the last part you should have changed some words but other than that you are a good writter

bella2025 · Answer

@laylasnii13 wrote:

I like it but i think on the last part you should have changed some words but other than that you are a good writter

thank you very much

laylasnii13 · Answer

@bella2025 wrote:

@laylasnii13 wrote:

I like it but i think on the last part you should have changed some words but other than that you are a good writter

thank you very much

Always