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montes67:

Why? Everyone's scared. But why? When I come close to people, they sweat, they cry, and they plead. But why? Why are they doing that, and that is when a soldier pulls my trigger, and then all my questions are answered. But now I have new questions. Why do I have to be scary? I never wanted to be. I would like to help save people instead of killing people for not doing as they are told. Why can't they use handcuffs instead? Why? Just why? When I see a boy about 7 or 8 years old scared. Of me. The soldier. Scared of dying. One little step and BOOM! He’s dead. I have a strong dislike for this, If the soldier were in this boy's shoes I bet he would not be doing this. I have killed many people, innocent people, and I have no choice. If I were able to speak to people I would say one word...SORRY.

dukedadon:

garbo

montes67:

@dukedadon wrote:
garbo
geez. thanks for the feedback man.

12jacklopez:

its ight

Sharkattack123:

nice

Astro:

Very creative! Great job!!!

afflatedAnimism:

It's pretty good

JackX:

@graylove wrote:
umm hi again i think you could in prove in the 5th to the 6th sentes on the last pharigragh
i think you could work on spelling more accurately

JackX:

@graylove wrote:
@jackx wrote:
umm hi again i think you could in prove in the 5th to the 6th sentes on the last pharigragh
i think you could work on spelling more accurately
well im sorry i dont spell well [/quote] heh

jazzixlin:

@jackx wrote:
@graylove wrote:
umm hi again i think you could in prove in the 5th to the 6th sentes on the last pharigragh
i think you could work on spelling more accurately
wow sis bad day 4 u ig...

BriannaFloyd:

So Thoughtful

baby2beans:

this is really speaking omg like it's givinggg it touches the past centuries and even connects to todays problems you should totally show one of your teachers that debates about this stuff.

montes67:

@baby2beans wrote:
this is really speaking omg like it's givinggg it touches the past centuries and even connects to todays problems you should totally show one of your teachers that debates about this stuff.
Thank you! means a lot

AlexXP:

I feel so touched- like I mean- is this a vent or is this real? I need a name. I'm in love with this so much- omg

montes67:

@alexxp wrote:
I feel so touched- like I mean- is this a vent or is this real? I need a name. I'm in love with this so much- omg
umm I not entirely sure what this is, kind of a vent not real, we just had to be an inanimate object and obviously I chose a gun... I just called it "why?" but it seems like a very boring title, so by all means gimme ideas to name it.

montes67:

@montes67 wrote:
@alexxp wrote:
I feel so touched- like I mean- is this a vent or is this real? I need a name. I'm in love with this so much- omg
umm I not entirely sure what this is, kind of a vent not real, we just had to be an inanimate object and obviously I chose a gun... I just called it "why?" but it seems like a very boring title, so by all means gimme ideas to name it.
I think i'd call it "unspoken words" but idk what do u think?

AlexXP:

@montes67 wrote:
@montes67 wrote:
@alexxp wrote:
I feel so touched- like I mean- is this a vent or is this real? I need a name. I'm in love with this so much- omg
umm I not entirely sure what this is, kind of a vent not real, we just had to be an inanimate object and obviously I chose a gun... I just called it "why?" but it seems like a very boring title, so by all means gimme ideas to name it.
I think i'd call it "unspoken words" but idk what do u think?
yea- i like that- way better than "why"- no offense, but it is

montes67:

@alexxp wrote:
@montes67 wrote:
will do, thanks!
@montes67 wrote:
@alexxp wrote:
I feel so touched- like I mean- is this a vent or is this real? I need a name. I'm in love with this so much- omg
umm I not entirely sure what this is, kind of a vent not real, we just had to be an inanimate object and obviously I chose a gun... I just called it "why?" but it seems like a very boring title, so by all means gimme ideas to name it.
I think i'd call it "unspoken words" but idk what do u think?
yea- i like that- way better than "why"- no offense, but it is

AlexXP:

???

montes67:

@alexxp wrote:
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ShotoTodoroki6105:

nice

Ninjashyper456:

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@montes67 wrote:
@alexxp wrote:
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