What do you think of my new song?
Verse One:
I miss my friends
We’re gonna take what’s ours to have
Why can't I find my purpose
Sacrifice is going on tonight

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
So out of the darkness and into the light
I tell my friends about my frustration
We’re gonna take what’s ours to have

Verse Two:
My biggest pet peeve in society is bullying
Leaves a thousand more who suffer in their wake
Hell is not being with my friends
Waltz it up, the pit is it

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
And this exercise
I tell my friends about my frustration
Here’s a new dance craze that’s sweeping the nation

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
And this exercise
I tell my friends about my frustration
Here’s a new dance craze that’s sweeping the nation

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
And this exercise
I tell my friends about my frustration
Here’s a new dance craze that’s sweeping the nation

Question

What do you think of my new song?
Verse One:
I miss my friends
We’re gonna take what’s ours to have
Why can't I find my purpose
Sacrifice is going on tonight

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
So out of the darkness and into the light
I tell my friends about my frustration
We’re gonna take what’s ours to have

Verse Two:
My biggest pet peeve in society is bullying
Leaves a thousand more who suffer in their wake
Hell is not being with my friends
Waltz it up, the pit is it

Chorus:
I jump when I hear a loud noise
And this exercise
I tell my friends about my frustration
Here’s a new dance craze that’s sweeping the nation

BriannaFloyd · Answer

I think it is awesome. Keep up the amazing work>

hailey1 · Answer

@briannafloyd wrote:

I think it is awesome. Keep up the amazing work>

Thnx

BriannaFloyd · Answer

@hailey1 wrote:

@briannafloyd wrote:

I think it is awesome. Keep up the amazing work>

Thnx

No problemm

oopdontknowher · Answer

It is really good i can relate to the song a lot AMAZING job!

hailey1 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

It is really good i can relate to the song a lot AMAZING job!

Thank you very much

oopdontknowher · Answer

@hailey1 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

It is really good i can relate to the song a lot AMAZING job!

Thank you very much

You are very welcome:) Now i need more lol

Astrid1 · Answer

It's alright. Not a big fan, but it's still somewhat good.

mrwhskers · Answer

the 2nd verse just didnt fell like it went along with the rest of the song

Jane2711 · Answer

That's a good lyrics ❤️ Keep it up

mrwhskers · Answer

@mrwhskers wrote:

the 2nd verse just didnt fell like it went along with the rest of the song

thats really my only critique =) i do like it though! you did a good job!

hailey1 · Answer

@mrwhskers wrote:

the 2nd verse just didnt fell like it went along with the rest of the song

thats really my only critique =) i do like it though! you did a good job!

Thanks

mrwhskers · Answer

@hailey1 wrote:

@mrwhskers wrote:

the 2nd verse just didnt fell like it went along with the rest of the song

thats really my only critique =) i do like it though! you did a good job!

Thanks

yw

laylasnii13 · Answer

I love it Bsf keep it up

P1n3appl31 · Answer

It's good but it could be just a little bit onger