Question

This feeling overwhelmed me,
A swelling of the heart.
I never truly thought I would be,
This happy at the start.

You take me by the hand,
And you lead me by the heart.
Over a beach of sand,
Through the grasses that we part.

With you I let go,
Of intuition and sound of mind.
My feelings I cannot help but show,
To a person who is so kind.

You kiss my soul so tender,
Embrace me through the night.
To you I have surrendered,
Myself so hold on tight,

So strongly you hold my heart,
Whisper softly in my ear.
I really feel that you understand,
Everything you hear.

I lose myself in you,
This close I have never been.
These feelings are so new,
To have a lover who is my friend.

Answer 1

its really good I like it 🙂

Answer 2

ofc c:

Answer 3

Make it a songg

Answer 4

wait... can i make this a metal song.... >;3

Answer 5

Wow this is nice beautiful

Answer 6

Nice I like it especially for having my own writing after an hour or two :)

Answer 7

Really? Can I hear it so far?

Answer 8

Really great job! Keep up the great work!

Answer 9

That was amazing!! It's so beautiful🦋

Answer 10

That's so good! Wish I had ur talent!

Answer 11

wow nice tho

Answer 12

your so good at that

Answer 13

beautiful i like it very much