Literally yyyyyy
IM tryna have ah nih mom
ona 1st row with da tissue and Kleenex

it really dont be know issue but they talkin and typin like they ina interview
and so much of wha deese nih say be cap
like so much running to da money i done
damm broke my kneecap
yo feemale head so good i done bought da whole
chinstrap
fingers itchin counting
money at da same time i pour lean
i stuck and stick ah lotta profit in my pockets
until they obesity
i said if da rap every fly we put da trap ona
trampoline if da rap every fly put da trap ona traplione

red in my double cup but this ain no tomatoes

Question

Literally yyyyyy
IM tryna have ah nih mom
ona 1st row with da tissue and Kleenex

it really dont be know issue but they talkin and typin like they ina interview
and so much of wha deese nih say be cap
like so much running to da money i done
damm broke my kneecap
 yo feemale head so good i done bought da whole
chinstrap
fingers itchin counting 
money at da same time i pour lean
i stuck and stick ah lotta profit in my pockets
until they obesity 
i said if da rap every fly we put da trap ona
trampoline if da rap every fly put da trap ona traplione

red in my double cup but this ain no tomatoes

Sailor · Answer

Dude you cant rap go on somewhere

Br0kenM00n · Answer

nah we arent hating, its just bad, theres a difference

Astro · Answer

No offense, I do not like it, I think it could use some improvements. Keep working hard!

oopdontknowher · Answer

@br0kenm00n wrote:

nah we arent hating, its just bad, theres a difference

true

BrokenMoon · Answer

its just bad

Laylalyssa · Answer

'tissue and kleenex' nah man

Laylalyssa · Answer

thats not dope

Laylalyssa · Answer

its not gangsta

AYOAJ · Answer

sm people just lasered you lol

Timmyspu · Answer

I think this could be good but you need to go and fix a few things.

axie · Answer

Ok i get all the hate you are getting for this, but basically the only thing that is messed up is none of the lines ryme, therfore it has no flow. and we want denzel curry type flow

Lexieee · Answer

ayyy dats a banger good job jhitt

Cloroxwipesgyyga · Answer

"MY opinion"Its not the best not the worst.😐

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

Yeah, this is not my favorite. It could use some improvement. The flow doesn't really go nicely, and the lyrics literally make no sense.

Sharkattack123 · Answer

It's nice

27ivastanley · Answer

i like it

Brazyxkapalot · Answer

@laylalyssa wrote:

'tissue and kleenex' nah man

llmaoooooooooooooooo