I need suggestions. I have a poem, and I'm stuck on it.

Across the waves of an open sea
The love for you has come to me
I love the way you kiss my cheek
Around you, I never want to blink

Every time you hold me tight
You make everything alright
You make my life so bright
And without you, there’d be little light

You are so kind and so sweet
You’re the puzzle piece that makes me complete
You’re the happy song that I keep on repeat
You make me feel so upbeat

Question

I need suggestions. I have a poem, and I'm stuck on it.

Across the waves of an open sea
The love for you has come to me
I love the way you kiss my cheek 
Around you, I never want to blink

Every time you hold me tight
You make everything alright
You make my life so bright
And without you, there’d be little light

You are so kind and so sweet
You’re the puzzle piece that makes me complete
You’re the happy song that I keep on repeat
You make me feel so upbeat

DeclanAkaba101 · Answer

the poem is rlly cool i luv it

OliverUwU · Answer

whenever your here
my pain drifts away
i get so nervous around you
and forget what to say

you laugh and tell me im sweet
i blush and my heart skips a beat
youll never know how much i love you
i want u to feel this way too

i cant say that i love you
since u wont let go of him
but ill wait for the right time
and ill still love you until then

(im not good at poems, but i did want to try, so there u go. sorry it took so long tho ;w; i was being spammed in dms- u can change it if youd like uwu)

Krissy525 · Answer

@oliveruwu wrote:

whenever your here my pain drifts away i get so nervous around you and forget what to say you laugh and tell me im sweet i blush and my heart skips a beat youll never know how much i love you i want u to feel this way too i cant say that i love you since u wont let go of him but ill wait for the right time and ill still love you until then (im not good at poems, but i did want to try, so there u go. sorry it took so long tho ;w; i was being spammed in dms- u can change it if youd like uwu)

its fine, thank you

OliverUwU · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

@oliveruwu wrote:

whenever your here my pain drifts away i get so nervous around you and forget what to say you laugh and tell me im sweet i blush and my heart skips a beat youll never know how much i love you i want u to feel this way too i cant say that i love you since u wont let go of him but ill wait for the right time and ill still love you until then (im not good at poems, but i did want to try, so there u go. sorry it took so long tho ;w; i was being spammed in dms- u can change it if youd like uwu)

its fine, thank you

ywwww <3 uwu

Krissy525 · Answer

ok, so I added some things to it, and if you guys like it, I will send it to my bf

When you are here
All my pain drifts away
Around you, I feel warm
And I just melt into you

There's not enough words to describe
The love that I have for you
You are the reason I smile so bright
Even on the hardest nights

Krissy525 · Answer

i added that to the end

OliverUwU · Answer

okii uwu

JustALilCat · Answer

Ooo, I like the sound of it

Krissy525 · Answer

@justalilcat wrote:

Ooo, I like the sound of it

thanks

JustALilCat · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

@justalilcat wrote:

Ooo, I like the sound of it

thanks

No probb

Sharkattack123 · Answer

nice