Question

They say everyone has a choice to make and the choices define us as a person but yet we didn't have a choice to be born so there is a higher power controlling us like the people giving us the options for us to make choices our parent mind told them hey let's have a kid so the mind gives us the options if the mind never had told our parents to have kids we would have never been here no one would so there is a higher power the mind individual gives us options but we make the choice so either defy ou mind or agree to it so do as much as to defy our mind not let our mind control how we are ut let us do it but there some things we to agree with our mind because making choices on our own is hard and we need help and our mind is there to help so don't let your mind control all your choices just some-Me

Answer 1

hope you like my poem

Answer 2

It's a very nice poem, but I can't understand where the start and stop places are.

Answer 3

Other than what I said before, I like the way it flows. Great job!

Answer 4

no im not

Answer 5

Oh no, what has happened?

Answer 6

im depressed

Answer 7

Isn't everyone?

Answer 8

i have been on suicidal watch for months

Answer 9

woah, okay, that's farther than I've ever gone

Answer 10

yea

Answer 11

But why?

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bc i can take it anymore i pretend to be happy but idk how much pain i can hold anymore

Answer 13

Do you have a therapist?

Answer 14

yea but she dont help i just shut ppl out but she say make friends maybe i can open up

Answer 15

I'd recommend you open up to her, tell her what's going on, take some things off your chest.

Answer 16

It helps me, I know because I was literally at Sheppard Pratt for 2 weeks

Answer 17

whats that

Answer 18

lets take this to dm

Answer 19

Yea, lets do that

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ok

Answer 21

wth

Answer 22

<3

Answer 23

u like my poem

Answer 24

ik i havent wrote a poem in a while

Answer 25

This is very creative.Though making choices are very hard, depending on what the choices are. This is very beautiful poem. Not that it is only beautiful its True.

Answer 26

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Answer 27

HmhmmmhmhmMMM

Answer 28

I guess it makes sense, but of course we dont control everything

Answer 29

Indeed.

Answer 30

Its descent, the better half of poems on this site

Answer 31

I like it for sure. DM me if you ever need to talk, I really be on this site to support everyone because 50% of y'all feeling the same way I do.