Question

they say everyone has a choice to make and the choices define us as a person but yet we didn't have a choice to be born so there is a higher power controlling us like the people giving us the options for us to make choices our parent mind told them hey let's have a kid so the mind gives us the options if the mind never had told our parents to have kids we would have never been here no one would so there is a higher power the mind individual gives us options but we make the choice so either defy ou mind or agree to it so do as much as to defy our mind not let our mind control how we are ut let us do it but there some things we to agree with our mind because making choices on our own is hard and we need help and our mind is there to help so don't let your mind control all your choices just some-Me'
hope you guys like my poem <3

Answer 1

Well brother I think it's a quite exceptional poem you know I can never write with it like that you give so much feeling to the way you write I could never copy that.

Answer 2

How do you guys have the same username? 0-0

Answer 3

I feel like there is a lot of grammatical error. Literally almost nothing in this poem is spaced out with a period.

Also, it seems like you typed this fast. There are many moments where you'll get this
"defy ou'' and whatnot.

I felt like I might have an aneurysm reading this.

Answer 4

I agree with @ilovespaghetti their are many grammatical errors, could use some major improvement. If you work on that you are defiantly on a great track!