Question

rate my song i made
insane
i hate that i hate you doesn't change a thing
i'll mess up your brain
i'm going insane
a messed up membran
blood replaced the rain
i couldn't keep sane
my death was in vain


All the time i see, birds in the trees, blood raining down on me, so high i can not breath
Your stupid girlfriend, ill kill her on 3, she is the one who i wanted to be, why couldnt she be me?
Your time is ticking ticking on the clock, once it's done i'll bash your head in with a rock
bich whoyou think i am? a pretty little princess, or a killer atm?

I don't want to say goodbye, it's either you or me, count to 1 2 3, your death happens right here with me, i'll tell him you hate him, get off of me, you're the one who i wanted to be.

i hate that i hate you doesn't change a thing
i'll mess up your brain
i'm going insane
a messed up membran
blood replaced the rain
i couldn't keep sane
my death was in vain
Pin the blame on someone who was never it, i must admit, im insane! A force drived by my jealousy couldn't be me, my mind is in the trees, wish you were me, now your death is on me, just let me be
All the voices in my head, drive me to the edge, wish i was dead, insane in the head.

Answer 1

its uhh, murdery?? but nice, a lil much on the rhymes, but good overall? idk its so so.

Answer 2

I love it. It sounds a whole lot like my life.

Answer 3

dang bro deep

Answer 4

dang it went my tummy

Answer 5

its so good

Answer 6

noice

Answer 7

well the song is good, the rhymes are too much though. and hey, if ya ever needa talk just dm me, im always here.

Answer 8

whats with the format?

Answer 9

format?

Answer 10

format*

Answer 11

it cool

Answer 12

Ima make a beat over dis

Answer 13

thats good need a beat tho

Answer 14

this fire af love it sm

Answer 15

nicley done

Answer 16

deep man deep

Answer 17

It's nice.

Answer 18

Isn't this a remix of another song? If it's not a great job because I don't know how to write anything

Answer 19

I love it U did AMAZINGG

Answer 20

i love it!!!!! keep the good work up buddy!!!<33:)

Answer 21

LOVE it keep up the great work

Answer 22

u did amazing

Answer 23

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