Question

You walked out my life
Then you want back in
The second that you decided that you can forgive
And you see I've got something you want
And I'd give it to you
No matter what you order
Until I screwed us over
Just like the last time
I kept saying this is the last time
I learned my lesson
Staying alone in my room
After all that i did to you
I was confused
And maybe I still am
But I honestly think that maybe your to good for me
I know it's not right
I cant get you off my mind
Yeah I see you everyday
Looking at photos
Reading the messages
The ones that you sent me
I could never forget them
Cuz you could never leave my mind
Yeah you could never leave my mind
This love is different not the same kind
Runnin my thoughts
I get persistent
When somebody says your name
And then I just miss you
Cause its better then leaving you
Even after all we’ve been through
Empty goodbyes
All the tears and the lies
Every single time
You weren't there when I needed you to be
Hoping your care about me cuz i needed you
Even though it kills me
I know it's not healthy
It doesn't help me
But I do it anyway
Looking at photos
Reading the messages
That you sent me
I could never forget em
Cause your the one I love
But I lost you now…..

Answer 1

YAss I love it

Answer 2

thanks

Answer 3

Very detailed, good job

Answer 4

thanks

Answer 5

you're welcome

Answer 6

nice!!!!!

Answer 7

thanks

Answer 8

Thats gooooddd <2

Answer 9

thanks

Answer 10

i love it :) pretty cool

Answer 11

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Answer 12

That's good ;0

Answer 13

It's good. I love it. In line 15 and line 45, it says "your", but it's supposed to be 'you're'. Other than that, it's great. Keep it up!