My poem:

Drifting, swaying, spinning, this is my love
Without it would kill me
Lots of craziness but still calm

When should I stop loving?
When my heart is content?
These questions make me doubt if

I really have a heart at all
Do I need to explain the feeling of being unwelcome?
The feeling of betrayal all hurts the ‘love’ feeling

Yet, I still love
I still live
I still care for those who care for me

Question

My poem:

Drifting, swaying, spinning, this is my love
Without it would kill me
Lots of craziness but still calm

When should I stop loving?
When my heart is content?
These questions make me doubt if

I really have a heart at all
Do I need to explain the feeling of being unwelcome?
The feeling of betrayal all hurts the ‘love’ feeling

Yet, I still love
I still live
I still care for those who care for me

SwaggyMark · Answer

this touched my heart ngl :c

YourBish · Answer

Awwhhh I just idk how I came up wit it.

Krissy525 · Answer

It's good. It really  touched me bc sometimes I feel this way

QueenNiyah · Answer

that was good show like to ur family or sum

YourBish · Answer

Nahh

@queenniyah wrote:

that was good show like to ur family or sum

Cyber · Answer

Sounds great wish I could do stuff like that I mean you're an amazing writer.

YourBish · Answer

Thanks broskies

Sharkattack123 · Answer

Awwh, I love it.

Astro · Answer

I think it needs a little work. Keep trying and you'll get better.

YourBish · Answer

Thanks. I mean this is my first poem so yah

Astro · Answer

@yourbish wrote:

Thanks. I mean this is my first poem so yah

Yeah, well with everything it needs practice. Keep up the good work!

Raynestorm · Answer

Thats good. Just keep at it. :)

kaciecowee25 · Answer

Good Job, keep doing you!