hey, wrote something for my creative writing class and wanted to know on any idea about how i should approach this story plot line next, all advice helpful!

here it is.

His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting right across from him. Her eyes rimmed red with tears and her mouth forming into a small whimper as the genuine fear began to rise in her breathing.
The key comes to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose eyes go wide.
“No…” She breaths, looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” She panics.
Two large men step out of the darkness from behind her as he pushes herself out of her chair.
“You can’t!” she screams, noticing the men and trying to run away. To no avail, they grab her with force. Jasper sits there, watching as she tries to kick and scream her way out of their grasp.
“Please!” She yells desperately, “No, give me another chance!”
The blonde decides to kick one of the men, the loosened grasp on her giving her a chance to get away but not for long.

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hey, wrote something for my creative writing class and wanted to know on any idea about how i should approach this story plot line next, all advice helpful!

here it is.

His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting right across from him. Her eyes rimmed red with tears and her mouth forming into a small whimper as the genuine fear began to rise in her breathing.
The key comes to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose eyes go wide.
“No…” She breaths, looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” She panics. 
Two large men step out of the darkness from behind her as he pushes herself out of her chair.
“You can’t!” she screams, noticing the men and trying to run away. To no avail, they grab her with force. Jasper sits there, watching as she tries to kick and scream her way out of their grasp.
“Please!” She yells desperately, “No, give me another chance!” 
The blonde decides to kick one of the men, the loosened grasp on her giving her a chance to get away but not for long.

JustALilCat · Answer

Go with your gut feeling, I'd make it into some type of horror-romance, where the boss of the people is secretly in love with the victim/target

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

oooo i like that, thanks!

JustALilCat · Answer

No problem! It kinda just came to me to be honest-

Cyber · Answer

@justalilcat wrote:

Go with your gut feeling, I'd make it into some type of horror-romance, where the boss of the people is secretly in love with the victim/target

Couldn't have said it better than myself

JustALilCat · Answer

@cyber wrote:

@justalilcat wrote:

Go with your gut feeling, I'd make it into some type of horror-romance, where the boss of the people is secretly in love with the victim/target

Couldn't have said it better than myself

Really?

Cyber · Answer

@justalilcat wrote:

@cyber wrote:

@justalilcat wrote:

Go with your gut feeling, I'd make it into some type of horror-romance, where the boss of the people is secretly in love with the victim/target

Couldn't have said it better than myself

Really?

Yes

JustALilCat · Answer

@cyber wrote:

@justalilcat wrote:

@cyber wrote:

@justalilcat wrote:

Go with your gut feeling, I'd make it into some type of horror-romance, where the boss of the people is secretly in love with the victim/target

Couldn't have said it better than myself

Really?

Yes

wow-

TheWraith2021 · Answer

You also have the opportunity for a complicated love-triangle right out of the gate. You could have one of those people pursuing the girl secretly be an FBI agent in disguise who so happens to be her ex-boyfriend.

monicasayshi1234567 · Answer

ooo, I really like that idea, it ads mystery and a developing plot line, will take the advice!