Question

my poem.....rate plz
https://sweek.com/read/173433/1102674648

Answer 1

I love it it’s super good

Answer 2

thx

Answer 3

I love this poem an how you put the sense of emotion into it, I thought it was very good an thoughtful on how you put it all together, although I did see some spelling corrections that needed fixed. On the first line of your poem you have the word "beaing" when it should be corrected as "beating" and in your ninth line you have the word "begining" when it should be "beginning" I hope this helped an good luck with any future poems you write. (:

Answer 4

thanks for the feedback.. u r so kind

Answer 5

This is such a good poem it's better than the rhymes I write

Answer 6

thank u so much

Answer 7

lovely poem

Answer 8

thx

Answer 9

i like the style of the wording, very good

Answer 10

Good job!! It's really good luv keep up the good work i wanna see more from u

Answer 11

That's really really good like really good like so good I want more of it LOL and normally I don't like poems but yours I really love.

Answer 12

Nice

Answer 13

thx

Answer 14

Np

Answer 15

That poem was awesome

Answer 16

:D i love it

Answer 17

thanks

Answer 18

i can tell that he feeling ur feeling is there is some rat in your house besides great poem

Answer 19

thx