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Monicaiswriting246:

This is part of a story I am writing and i need help on where I should go next with where the girl is taken and what will happen, i'm stuck so any suggestions will help! here's the story His eyes flicked across the table, landing on the blonde girl sitting across from him. Her eyes were rimmed red with tears that had flowed unrelentingly. A small whimper escaped her lips as genuine fear began to rise in her breath. The rusty key came to a stop on the table, one end pointing to an empty chair and the other to the blonde girl whose crystal blue eyes went wide. “No…” She said, breathing; looking around the room, frantic yet unbelieving. “No, you can’t-” she said, panicking. Two large men stepped out of the darkness from behind her as she pushed herself out of her chair. “You can’t!” she screamed, trying to run away. Unable to escape, they forcefully grab her. Jasper sat, watching as she tried to kick and scream her way out of their grasp. “Please!” She yelled desperately, “No, give me another chance! Please Dylan!” Dylan? A name? Whose? The blonde kicked one of the men, the loosened grasp on her creating a temporary window of escape. Moments later they tackled her to the ground, the mechanical clicking sound of a taser hitting skin echoed through the room. Was it a taser? Did she die? Where were they taking her? Why were they taking her? Jasper had no answers as he sat in his chair, staring straight ahead as he disassociated himself from everything. He was used to this.

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

so, what genre would you prefer?

TETSXPREME:

Welcome To Questioncove! Im guessing the paragraph is about someone cheating or something?

Monicaiswriting246:

@ilovespaghetti wrote:
so, what genre would you prefer?
probably like scheme, like a big idea around something, or something more than what it seems, so mystery lol

Monicaiswriting246:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
Welcome To Questioncove! Im guessing the paragraph is about someone cheating or something?
no not really, just mystery, the guy telling from his pov has no relations to the girl and theres a bunch of ppl in the room aswell

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

@monicaiswriting246 wrote:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
Welcome To Questioncove! Im guessing the paragraph is about someone cheating or something?
no not really, just mystery, the guy telling from his pov has no relations to the girl and theres a bunch of ppl in the room aswell
So, why is Jasper used to this? Is he someone who is around violence frequent? How will his character play into this story? These are questions you can consider.

Monicaiswriting246:

@ilovespaghetti wrote:
@monicaiswriting246 wrote:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
Welcome To Questioncove! Im guessing the paragraph is about someone cheating or something?
no not really, just mystery, the guy telling from his pov has no relations to the girl and theres a bunch of ppl in the room aswell
So, why is Jasper used to this? Is he someone who is around violence frequent? How will his character play into this story? These are questions you can consider.
oh no dw i have the first few pages explaining that but i just want some ideas on maybe where the girl would be taken if not executed

TETSXPREME:

Maybe it was all a prank :?

iiXilosis:

part 2 please i beg

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

Maybe it leads to one of those killing games, kind of like squid game or danganronpa. Those type of things. I'm also a little biased because I like those kind of things lmao

Monicaiswriting246:

@iixilosis wrote:
part 2 please i beg
haha, ive already written three pages lololololool

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