yooo i made a story uhm suggestions are certainly welcome (context in the comments; story title, characters so far etc.)

"It's not even my fault! What're you talking about." I yell. "Alex, I'm just jokin' don't even worry about it, it's cool," Milo replies. "That was funny, though, I'm gonna be honest. I love seeing you all flustered and mad and stuff." he teases. I blush and roll my eyes.

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yooo i made a story uhm suggestions are certainly welcome (context in the comments; story title, characters so far etc.)

"It's not even my fault! What're you talking about." I yell. "Alex, I'm just jokin' don't even worry about it, it's cool," Milo replies. "That was funny, though, I'm gonna be honest. I love seeing you all flustered and mad and stuff." he teases. I blush and roll my eyes.

KarlJacobs · Answer

So this story is a LGBTQ+

SaltTheLoser · Answer

is this a fanfic

SaltTheLoser · Answer

gay blush

KarlJacobs · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

is this a fanfic

no

SaltTheLoser · Answer

whats the story gonna be about

liatartt · Answer

When writing, make sure to indent & use new paragraphs every single time someone new is talking! Also be aware that you should never rush through the story!~

KarlJacobs · Answer

Alex (16) is the main character in the story and he has a HUUUUUGE crush on milo (his best friend) but he doesnt know if milo feels the same way so he goes through all of these "clues"(?) just to figure out if he is.

KarlJacobs · Answer

@liatartt wrote:

When writing, make sure to indent & use new paragraphs every single time someone new is talking! Also be aware that you should never rush through the story!~

Okay! Thanks for the pointers!

SaltTheLoser · Answer

whats gonna be the climax of the story

SaltTheLoser · Answer

i just think your story is gonna need more depth for it to be interesting

SaltTheLoser · Answer

i suggest include like ullying or some other force your characters need to confront

KarlJacobs · Answer

oh yeah theres gonna be like roadblocks for my character(s) too

KarlJacobs · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

whats gonna be the climax of the story

when he finds out if milo is or isnt gay

SaltTheLoser · Answer

milo should die too in the end

SaltTheLoser · Answer

or reject him

KarlJacobs · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

milo should die too in the end

idk abt that

KarlJacobs · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

or reject him

who knows?

SaltTheLoser · Answer

happy endings are lame

KarlJacobs · Answer

who said it was gonna be a happy ending?????

liatartt · Answer

Oooh, maybe some type of betrayal?

GalaxyzStarz · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

happy endings are lame

i agree, seems like most stories don't have any plot twists..

KarlJacobs · Answer

@liatartt wrote:

Oooh, maybe some type of betrayal?

honestly atp yall are giving me ideas

liatartt · Answer

yepppppp!

KarlJacobs · Answer

@galaxyzstarz wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

happy endings are lame

i agree, seems like most stories don't have any plot twists..

i mean it may be a bit of both

SaltTheLoser · Answer

dad should catch them kissing and beat his son

GalaxyzStarz · Answer

lmaoooo yes

KarlJacobs · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

dad should catch them kissing and beat his son

PLS

GalaxyzStarz · Answer

dad asks mom where his double-barrel shotgun is...

KarlJacobs · Answer

@galaxyzstarz wrote:

dad asks mom where his double-barrel shotgun is...

im abt to make an alternative story with all yall's ideas