Question

pls give advice on where i should go next with this story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LRIZq81JnRVnsbQ7wh4Z3YG5Cd-PiQUAZ6Uk7WpC9zk/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

its mystery/thriller btw

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

I'm a very creative person so there are is like just a spider web of ideas all interconnect concerning on where to go with the story from here. One idea is where the people in charge of giving out the key to these high schoolers are actually part of a secret society similar to the Illuminati. Very wealthy people who are pretty much untouchable. They could specifically choose high schoolers to participate in these rallies to either turn them into child assassins who work for them, sell them to the highest bidder via the black market, or even use them for certain arcane rituals. Jazz's father can be a part of this group and the reason Jazz has not been picked yet is because they want to initiate him within the society. I'll let you decide what to do with the rest.

Answer 4

YOOOO THIS IS SO GOOD