So I have to write an essay in APA formatting, and I want to see if there's any feedback I can be given on the first part that I did. (By the way, I'll fix the citations later, my teacher told me it was more important to write the actual essay first.

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BrokenMoon · Answer

Only one suggestion, don't start your paragraph with a quote. Besides that I think it's perfect. You did amazing!

Sailor · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

Only one suggestion, don't start your paragraph with a quote. Besides that I think it's perfect. You did amazing!

Ok thanks :p

BrokenMoon · Answer

@sailor wrote:

@brokenmoon wrote:

Only one suggestion, don't start your paragraph with a quote. Besides that I think it's perfect. You did amazing!

Ok thanks :p

Yes of course! Hope you get a good grade!

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